Sage Mode

[madaramaster]

This is just a re-make of naruto from the cover of 420 (in sage mode) http://madaramaster.deviantart.com/art/Sage-Mode-120914532

Just in case anyone wants to compare here is the old version http://madaramaster.deviantart.com/art/Sage-Naruto-420-101446712

special thanks to Exze for the idea

Enjoy

 

[lee-nus]

i think you did well on this. some shadows are a little too undynamic. for instance, you made a completely straightlined shadow at the bottom of his shirt. things like that look unattractive. some of the other shadows could be better defined too, but you have to learn that sort of thing as you go.

ur overall sense of shading placement seems good, so try and put something more into it, like little effects and stuff, to take it to the next level! read some tutorials by accomplished artists to see what u can do better. for instance, i know dynamic dragon made a good cellshading tutorial, but i cant remember wats in it... ^^;

 

[VASSiLi]

Nice job. Keep it up!

 

[madaramaster]

thanks especially to you Leenus

 

[pineappleherb]

yeah, those hard 90 degree right angles in the lines lee was talking about look too spongebob squarepants instead of round

i think it looks pretty good, the sage red marks look better in the new version, but the actual eyes look funky wide. even if its in the original art, shorten that line up some

 

[madaramaster]

yeah, those hard 90 degree right angles in the lines lee was talking about look too spongebob squarepants instead of round

i think it looks pretty good, the sage red marks look better in the new version, but the actual eyes look funky wide. even if its in the original art, shorten that line up some

thanks and i love your sig

 

[¬Silente]

cool (:

 

[madaramaster]

thanks

 

[KnuckleheadedNinja]

looks nice.