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lee-nus

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i think you did well on this. some shadows are a little too undynamic. for instance, you made a completely straightlined shadow at the bottom of his shirt. things like that look unattractive. some of the other shadows could be better defined too, but you have to learn that sort of thing as you go.

ur overall sense of shading placement seems good, so try and put something more into it, like little effects and stuff, to take it to the next level! read some tutorials by accomplished artists to see what u can do better. for instance, i know dynamic dragon made a good cellshading tutorial, but i cant remember wats in it... ^^;
 

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Nice job. Keep it up!
 

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thanks :D especially to you Leenus :D
 

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yeah, those hard 90 degree right angles in the lines lee was talking about look too spongebob squarepants instead of round

i think it looks pretty good, the sage red marks look better in the new version, but the actual eyes look funky wide. even if its in the original art, shorten that line up some
 

madaramaster

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yeah, those hard 90 degree right angles in the lines lee was talking about look too spongebob squarepants instead of round

i think it looks pretty good, the sage red marks look better in the new version, but the actual eyes look funky wide. even if its in the original art, shorten that line up some
thanks and i love your sig :D
 

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cool (:
 

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thanks
 
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