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Fairly realistic for the time period. And the line about “pleasure” was said more in passing, with the MC showing no interest what-so-ever, and largely ignoring all of the woman.Reread first pages from new chapter. Maybe I chosed wrong word but I cant help calling women talking about pleasure with 10ish boy edgy
Maybe it wasn’t necessary, but I also doubt it was included for self-insert Power fantasy reasons, or to be edgy