turtles I have corrected one thing in the chapter, and added some small notes, on page 3 (since page 1 is my logo I think) I added a note about what you mean by "I am a doll", and on page 5, I corrected the text from "unlike me, that person was human" to "that person is a different human being from me", I also added a note regarding what is "wings of freedom".
the chapter link is still the same, but this was something I had to clarify.
I was rereading the chapter in Korean, and noticed that the word in-gan (human), was not separated by a comma, so the term was applied to a polite way of saying that he is of a different race.