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[PhoenixRoy]

Errr....I was bored and I was re-reading some chapters and came across this and decided to come it. I suck at water, it was my first try at it, I'm going to try a different what next time and mess with the opacity a bit.

For some reason I did not want to color the fence o_o. I think I made the for/steem too thick, I'm going to post a fogless version soon

Edit: A bar from this scan has been made for anyone who wants to use it YD. First bar ever!

Edit 2: Here's the one with the black outline that I forgot to add to the first, but who knows you may like the first one more.

The different skin tones were annoying ;p

 

[kyuubiseal]

OHHHHHHHH YA. This i would give you a great thumbs up. Now for the main part try to mess the opicity....*STARES*

Nice mist, and the skin tone is not that bad, try to add alittle blush in there face! that would make it awesome.

 

[Az3r]

Hey, nice one, dude. And I agree with kyuubiseal about the blush.

 

[juUnior]

Awesome coloring xD And awesome choice of panel

 

[qwan3356]

its really nice, the water is done pretty well, Great work!

 

[bax]

The water is nice, the skin tones too

But personally, I think you overdid the steam, it almost covers the whole panel

 

[weixiaobao]

so kawaii