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Hi.
This is my version of the 314 cover.

That is all.
 

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It's very nice. I like it. :grin
 

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thats very awsome. I really like how u did the fold in the clothes :smile-big
 

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the clothes folding was done very well. The only minor problem i noticed is that the skin tone is a little off. other than that job well done :)
 

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The only problem I see is... Naruto is missing his whiskers!! Haha when I first looked at it, I felt that something was off... then I realized that that was the problem. Other than that, it looks very nice. I like the hair especially.
 

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You should shade the face , and shouldnt smudge kakashi's mask from right to left.
 

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not bad, it has some elements i like a lot, like kakashi's jacket and vest, and his hair. but there are some areas that you could work a bit more on too. i think naruto's hair is too dark, and a little too reddish. something about kakashi's right glove seems a little off, and the forehead protectors shine a little inconsistenly in the light, if you know what i mean. still, good job
 

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OK, thanks everybody.
The only minor problem i noticed is that the skin tone is a little off. other than that job well done
yes, I try to do it better, whit more color, but the result is pathetic.

The only problem I see is... Naruto is missing his whiskers!!
eeehh...my english isn't very good, so... what is whiskers?? :amuse

You should shade the face , and shouldnt smudge kakashi's mask from right to left.
I know it, but when I shade more, the image appears like more dirty and with dark pieces (I have to improve this...).
And the kakashi's mask...I didn't notice! in the face there are shades and in the mask brightness...although I can save the situation because it could be for the right hand... nah, it's a great mistake. Anyways, thanks for tell me it Vlado.

i think naruto's hair is too dark, and a little too reddish. something about kakashi's right glove seems a little off
jeje, I like the dark and reddish naruto's hair, and the kakashi's gloves are off because I don't know to color well the black zones and I try to not do it.XD
and the forehead protectors shine a little inconsistenly in the light,
I absolutely agree, sorry, when I am coloring, there are times that I want to finish it soon and I forget things like that.
 

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The lines on Naruto's face... you know, on his cheeks, that remind us that the Kyuubi's also part of him?
 

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oh!, I forgot do it, ups...I will edit the image.
 

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Now it looks complete. Excellent job :)
 
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