[338]Good Bye Asuma

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Hello Hello!

I saw that darksasuke mentioned a cleaned double page of the chapter 338 by shade!I DIDN'T KNOW :D

I found the page the fast as I can and do it ^^

Here is my result

2 versions:

-Orange <3!


-Blue <3!


Yatta :D!

THX TO SHADE FOR THE BEST CLEAN EVAR!
 
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:o it's awesome! <3
 

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good job ^^
 

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Looks smooth and cool, love both colours

Great work, SB.

:naruto
-AF.3
 

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very nice. you really are sticking to amaretti's style. hmm......only thing i dont really like the background.....its too.....plain....check on pictures of the sky, there is more to the clouds than one poofy cloud or 2.

try smudging the clouds...make them more dynamic. again, google some pics of clouds and you will see what im talking about
 

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try smudging the clouds...make them more dynamic. again, google some pics of clouds and you will see what im talking about
Yes I know what you are talking about but I think I am the crappy artist at Background you have never seen 8________D.I will try to add gray tone on my next Panel :)
Thx for the aDvice :D !
 

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Sympatoch la colo ;)

Bon boulot !
 

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wooow good work :) I think i prefers the red though....its seems a bit more 'alive'. the blue looks kinda common :amuse
 
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