354 cover by DS *updated*

[kunai-knight]

Okay well here it is...its a bit rushed cuz i really wanted to move on to the other great pics Shade has done, but it turned out O.K so far i guess. I'll tidy it up a bit later when i'm finished with the others Comments/Criticism as usual please....they both really help in improving my skill-level.

Some edits and obvious corrections made... Juugo still needs a bit of work tho. (His hair sucks btw )

 

[e-s-g]

Re: 354 cover by DS

I like! Sasuke's shirt has been shaded great.
However, I think Juugo's hair needs more highlights/shading. How you did that small amount of shading would've worked well, as long as you follow the hair spikes.
Also the snake could be shaded. Unless you wanted it like that?

Again, i like it, keep it up.

 

[kunai-knight]

Hey thanks for the comments I've made some edits now...juugo's hair is still a mess though. Honestly its ridiculous! Shading to the snake has now been added though. (I wanted it shaded...lol just was in too much of a hurry to do the others! lol) Anything else needs working on?

 

[bax]

Loo
king great. The snake looks good

 

[TechnoMagus]

the characters are well done! could improve on the other parts though...

 

[fireboy]

snake color R so special!thx 4 it

 

[juUnior]

Wow, good coloring. I can say, that the best was idea of doing background outside of the panel cover xD It looks cool