356 page 3 by KS..yes...a...SOFT SHADE!

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yeah.....still practicing with soft shading, i think im getting better no?

 

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hmm I don;t know what to say, kyubisharingan .. I have mix feelings.. on one hand Tobi is good to see in soft shade, but Deidara.. I think that he looks awful, but maybe that was your intention :p

It's good, but I don't like it as much as I like diferent covers.
 

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looking good KS.....why won't you take on the gallery offer....? :confused

wait, deidei looks constipated! :s
 

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HAHA! he really does! dont worry imma change that(....as soon as i find my damn tablet pen)

and the gallery offer...yeah....not ready yet...
 
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Yeah agreed with the others. Tobi looks great, Deidara looked weird :p

But since you gonna change it, can't wait for the new one :D
 

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I really have to say that after reading all the comment and seeing what you have done to Deidis face really made me lol! I think that one of the problem is the neck it looks twisted. Tobi looks really nice in soft shade.
 

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Awesome job on Tobi. Deidi only looks a bit funny because of a few misplaced shadings on the cheek and neck and a bit of the nose. Remove those, step back, and have a fresh look (maybe have a look at how others have chosen to shade those areas) and you'll know how to make the shading better. It's funny how a couple of harmless shades, can make a picture look really different isn't it? But have another go - that's what feedback is for! :D
 

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haha thanks guys, i really appriciate the possitive feedback^^ i agree the crease did look kinda weird once i looked at it more. so i updated it^^



i still wonder how those other artists made the kanji glow...i mean i know how but...how what did they do to the lineart T_T
 

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It's better like this, nice one ^^
 

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haha thanks man. i wish i didnt ass the crease...but hey, im still improving, so there gonna be times when i make mistakes^^
 

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Yeah, the second version's better, KS ^^
 

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...whoa....its been a while....GK-sama.....thanks^^
 

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keep up your work... :)
 

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haha thanks guys, i really appriciate the possitive feedback^^ i agree the crease did look kinda weird once i looked at it more. so i updated it^^



i still wonder how those other artists made the kanji glow...i mean i know how but...how what did they do to the lineart T_T
It's very simple, select the kanji with the Magic Wand tool, do a new layer over the lineart and fill it. If you want to keep the black outlines, go to select -> Contract -> 2 px or something, then fill. Choose color and make glowwy. <3

Now finish that Zarosaki chappie and you'll get a big hug from me! <3
 
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