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Hi people!!! Caracols´ come back XDDDD
I hope you like it ^^

 
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Re: 278 page 11 Pein by Caracols

wow looks kool very nice only thing is u should have made the lip colour a bit lighter well other than that GOOD JOB :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

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It´s true!!! l´ve edited it with other lips and other details XDD, thanks for your idea ^^
 

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Good Try but Fix the eyes, he has "extravismo Lateral" the eyes are looking in differents ways
 

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this is almost perfect except for some details as mentioned from the posts above..

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Eyes fixed now ^^
 

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looking better with the eye fixed.. :)
 

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Hey good work!, looks better! i likeit
 

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I though you left naruto world forgotten hehehehe...It's good to see you back.
The coat is very nice...the eyes too...
Maybe you should do more lightings on hair, and shadows in the right of the face hehehe...maybe... (And the background is a little fuzzyXD)

PD:Se me hace un poco raro estar escribiendote en inglés...pero ya sabes, un poco de respeto y tal...: p ...En definitiva, que está muy realista, pero la cara parece como plana, me refiero a que quedaría más realista con una sombra exterior que le cubriese más un lado de la cara (para hacer más diferente uno que otro...me explico fatal)...y lo mismo para el pelo. Y al quitar el lineart has tenido que usar el dedo para que los bordes queden naturales, pero yo repasaría un poco las tuberías y tuercas del fondo, así como el protector de la bandana para demilitar mejor los bordes... bueno, decirlo es gratis no?

Perhaps I'm saying you a lot of stupid things, actually this is a great job. :thumbs
Sayônara.
 

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De hecho q se ve bien y es un buen fanart, por mi parte el sombreado esta bien no siempre tiene q haber una sombra exterior aunque no seria mala idea tmpoco, y pos las tuberias casi no se notan trata de hacerlas mas enfocadas, aunque ahora yo uso mi lineas visibles creo que quedaria mucho mejor con la lineas.

Saludos! =)
 

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I like it and keep it up. :D
 
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