[420] Naruto & Jiraya Sage Mode

[Davekun]

Hello people, fist lines on Manga Helpers.
Hope you like it, and use it.

Ill be posting here many times(hopefuly).

Enjoy....(or suffer??)

http://davekun.deviantart.com/art/Lineart-Naruto-Jiraya-Sagemode-100641882

 

[Jaime F.]

Looks like it has a lot of coloring potential Dave, and welcome to MH. My name is Jaime, and I'm 1 of the 2 art mods here along with Stiluz. If you have any questions message 1 of us, and will help you if we can. Anyways, I think the way you made Naruto looks pretty good, but I think Jiraiya could look a lot better. Now I know Jiraiya is ugly anyways in Sage Mode, but I think some of his blood/make up design looks to thick. Well, that's all the criticsm I have for you. Just know you're welcome to post your art here when ever you want. See you next time Davekun, and keep up the good work.

 

[Davekun]

THanks a lot, those are the comments that noob lime me need.
I'll take you the word, and i'll be asking if needed.!

 

[RyuSensei]

Some advices: do a bigger version, and the thinner the lines, the best they are.

 

[Toobi]

nice work... keep trying

 

[- aMt -]

nice.... guy

 

[Davekun]

Some advices: do a bigger version, and the thinner the lines, the best they are.

Thanks for the advices, I'll listen to them a lot, next ones will be bigger and cleaner!