Illustration A colouring request i did

[BlaZeR]

Still a beginner,this is like my 4th coloring, and I tried some different techniques.Criteques?

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[Silhouette]

Your sense of shading is not bad, your skill can improve a lot by reading tutorials and practicing

Don't smudge the colours of one part over other parts (e.g. the shades on jacket are smudged over fingers and background).

My advice is to be patient, it takes efforts and time

Hope to see you doing amazing colourings