Ch. 338 p. 14-15 by Lee-nus <3

[lee-nus]

decided to put up my version too. thought i'd be first, but caracols beat me to it! >.< anyway, his version is probably better too. i got fed up with mine, and i dont really like it. its an incredibly nice scene though... *sob sob*

umm... what else... i might go over it again, and add the forest that originally, probably should be there... pardon the laziness. ^^

well, i hope you like it a little bit, even though its a cursed piece of crap! xD oh, and thanks to shade for the neat clean!

cheers!

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47196588/

 

[ibra87]

What the hell are you talking about? I like it =). Maybe a little bit more shading on Shikamaru's hair, but that's all.

 

[kyubisharingan]

AWSOME lee-nus! is great!

 

[holmes221]

that's cool..the color suits the theme well

 

[Caracols]

What do you say??!!! it´s realy cool!!! I thouth to do asuma as you but in tne last moment I do a cloud XDDDD but seriusly , It´s awesome ^^

 

[lee-nus]

thanks guys, i appreciate it. i'll try and go over it and improve it as soon as i can! ^^

 

[angry]

I love the background you chose. The only problem i have is with the picture is that Asuma is in color, instead of in "smoke" if you know what I mean...

If you have him in a seperate layer, you could try desaturating him and changing the layermode to multiply or something like that. Or you can leave it like this if you're totally satisfied with the image and curse me for not liking it =P

Greets, Angry

 

[lee-nus]

lol, yeah. actually i tried desaturating him, and i didnt like the outcome. that was at a rather early stage though, so maybe i should try it out again. i agree that it would probably be more fitting... ^^

 

[qwan3356]

i like the background and all too, i think its great the way it is, keep it up lee-nus

 

[Efernand]

I like it a lot, wish you had a version with the text

 

[lee-nus]

i actually thought about adding the text. i might... ^^

plus, i have asuma in grey scale now, but my internet connection doesnt like my computer, so i cant update it yet... *_*