Ch311 Page17 Box5 - Narutos face

[xahny]

Well, my first post here and my first coloring aswell. I'm pretty satisfied with it, though I really have to learn how to make the hair look nice.
Would be nice with some constructive criticism.

http://img377.imageshack.us/my.php?image=naruto6dg.jpg

 

[abu_89]

good job on the face... the hair needs more highlights and shadows, what you've done is too... consistent...

 

[destinator]

I like it for the first try...well but as you said the hair needs more highlights/shadows

 

[lee-nus]

i agree with the above... as for another example, i think you have to mark out the nose, using the same techniques or so