That's much better; for right girl (aka ARIKA) anyway
except maybe for the wings; when i said that her wings looks too thick that was because they really are and looked like they are "bleeding", and now you did what i told you not to do that is, removing too much >.< Check the raw to see where the lines are suppose to be thicker (just dont make them go overboard, and make them SMOOTH)
Smooth, that's the word! when you resized, some of the lines became a bit wavy, like on arika's chin (if you see what i mean?).. and not just on her, also on the middle guy's hair (did you redraw all his hair with a 3point brush? Oo.. some of the lines are also missing, making his hair look weird)
And while we are still in the lines; you still didnt put back some of the lines that makes the depth (hands, bra..) just look at the raw page; and please put back the white line (light) in middle guy's hair
As for the gradient, it's not perfect but it's better!
some place could need some work like
the fire back where the gradient is not smooth enough at the end, should be light gray at the tip of the flames, so that they dont appear too hard;
please put back the line of the floor
boots (both girls, especially in the round thing above their feet), petal right under arika's shoulder, the grip of arika's sword, arika's bra, nina's (that's left girl's name..) round thing under her shoulder..
put back the black sprey thingy above the white effect ^^
And that should be all i can see for now ^.^