Ok, better. This is a good clean. A few things to remember though. You re-drew your borders with anti-alias on. This is a no no. It ads a line of gray on both sides of the main black line, and the main black line tends to be thinner than wanted. It's always better to use the pencil tool for borders, unless they're slanted at which time I would use the line tool to re-draw them.
I liked the way you made kakashi and inos hair and kakuzus shirt wrap thing smooth. However, it looks like you only did this to a few things, and so it makes them stand apart from the other line art. Mainly it makes them seem lighter than the others. This also makes them contrast any line art around them. For instance choujis nose looks like it was re-done, however, this makes choujis nostril lines looks jagged in contrast.
Your line art re-drawing is great. there's just a few more things. second panel, there should be white between inos eyebrow and the line that connects her hose and the last part of the eyebrow. Also, in the last frame there's also some line art in chouji and kakashis pants that you forgot to re-do.
And lastly you need to go through and thoroughly clean the whites, especially around line art. It easily stands out around line art, and the darker dust stands out in the whites. I know it seems like its tedious and meticulous work but it has to bee done. A lot of it looks like jpeg artifacts left over from the original image, these have to be especially taken care of. Otherwise it somewhat defeats the purpose of saving as png, and really brings down the quality of the picture.
hope this helps, and good job.