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Critique my Cleaning

Discussion in 'Quality Control & Critiques' started by mwsmws22, Aug 11, 2017.

  1. mwsmws22

    mwsmws22 Registered User

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    Let me know what you think! Much appreciated!
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  2. Mana Light

    Mana Light Registered User

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    It looks fine but you should test with some more raws of that manga to see if the way is actually good.
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