Dain attempts Editing Challenge #002

ddadain

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Bleh, post the link later XD HAR HAR >_> XD

:darn :darn :darn :darn :darn

Router problems right now[br]Posted on: August 11, 2006, 09:19:37 AM_________________________________________________


blarg blarg

one note,

I did the rotationing first and foremost :P It seems that when i saved as png, it de-rotate itself :P

blah blah, i didn't bother to save the psds and i don't want to redo the whole thing again XD call me lazy, whatever, just to let you know, i had it aligned before :P [br]Posted on: August 11, 2006, 11:27:06 AM_________________________________________________now, i noticed that i never ever get stars on my thingy [avatar]

O_O WHY?!?!?!

o_o o_o o_o o_o

negative feedback is welcomed but will be ignored XD HAHAHA :p :p
 

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well first thing is that you removed the brackets in the transform which might confuse ppl to think its part of the line being said

hmm second thing is well this is just my personal preference but its the sizing. Like the first panel - the 1st and 3rd bubbles the fonts are too big, its very near the edge of the bubble, reducing it by about 2 or 3px should make it look nicer.

last panel- the first bubble could be rearranged in another way :P

But nice job nonetheless considering you are a qcer instead of an editor :)
 

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cough

it's your personal preference XD

ya, the last panel can be rearranged, but then i wanted to emphasize "deranged" and I didn;t want to break it up so :P that was the best possible thing for what I wanted...
 

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sao's right. You don't want the text to be that big compared to the bubble.
 
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