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Here's a Fanfic of the next chapter that I ran across earlier this week. Thoughts anyone? I thought it was decent.
Page 01
Light: Hahahahaha
Light: Yes, I am Kira.
Light: You should be proud
Light: Near.
Page 02
Light: Youre the first person to catch me.
Matsuda:
Light: Mikami, your intentions were good, but I value absolute obedience over assistance.
Light: But I will let you live.
Mikami thinking: God ! You havent forsaken me..
SPK: ?!
Page 03
Death Note Page 105 Impossible
With his might in one hand and his pride in the other, he towers over the earth.
Page 04
Near thinking: I will let you live, is that even something that he can say in a situation like this?
Near thinking: No, I havent made any mistakes, everything is in place.
Near thinking: I left myself no openings, even if he tries something .
Near thinking: Kira is done Yagami Light is finished.
Near thinking: He has absolutely no merit to what he said.
Near: You are hardly in a position to say I will let you live.
SPK:
NPA:
Page 05
Light: Near, you need to reflect on what you just said.
Light: You are nothing but trash to me without Mello at your side.
Near:
Light: You should have looked deeper into why I chose Mikami as my servant.
Light: Yes, its true that he seems to be loyal to me in every way .
Light: but almost everyone is loyal to their God.
Page 06
Light: Well, just like you gave me a clue, Im sure you only need to hear one word to figure out what Im talking about.
Near:
SPK:
Light: Shinigami.
NPA: ?
Near:
Light: Ryuk, please explain to Near what a Shinigami does?
Ryuk: ?
Page 07
Ryuk: Sure. Although I dont see the point in this.
Ryuk: A Shinigami lives off of the lifespan of humans.
Ryuk: Shinigami use the notebook to kill a human.
Near thinking: thats good to know, but what does that matter?
Ryuk thinking: Why does Light want me to tell this to them?
Ryuk thinking: This wont buy him much time
Light: Continue on Ryuk.
Page 08
Ryuk: By killing a human with the notebook, the Shinigami increases their life by the years the human would have had left to live.
Near:
Near thinking: Increases their lifespan by killing a human .
Near thinking: Is he saying were cattle to Shinigami?
Near thinking: No, that is already too obvious . He cant be talking about something this Shinigami will do, is he?
Near: Mr. Shinigami.
Ryuk: Yes?
Near: Are you going to kill us?
NPA & SPK: !What!?
Page 09
Ryuk: hyuk hyuk hyuk
Ryuk: Nope, I have no intention of interfering.
Ryuk: Although I can, I dont care enough about whats happening to kill you guys.
Aizawa thinking: Thats good But why is Light mentioning this?
Aizawa thinking: Whatever the case, Light should not be able to do a thing
Matsuda: Man, thats good to know Ryuk.
Matsuda: So youve decided to go with us?
Ryuk: Matsuda, youre an idiot, did you not just hear what I said?
Ryuk: I dont care what happens to anyone. But if I were to kill anyone, youd be the first.
Matsuda: sorry
Page 10
Light: Have you figured it out yet, Near?
Near thinking: Another Shinigami?
Near thinking: It cant be . Mikami couldnt have a Shinigami
Near thinking: There was only that notebook
Near thinking: Plus, I thoroughly looked through Mikamis background
Near thinking: There was no sign of him ever having a notebook There must be more to this... he might be using this conversation to mask some sort of plan of his... I need to pay close attention to his hands,... just in case he tries to write something.
Near: No I havent, so please enlighten me.
Page 11
Light: Fuhahaha
SPK & NPA: .
Light: I suppose it was a bit much of me to expect you to catch it, especially since its a lot easier to catch if youve used the notebook as long as I have.
Light: Mikami.
Mikami: !Yes God?!
Light: What happened to your Mother?
Mikami thinking: My Mother?!
Mikami: She died in a car accident when I was a child.
Page 12
Light: Who was she killed by?
Mikami: She was killed by the kids who use to bully me in school.
Mikami: They also died along with her.
Light: Were there anyone else involved in the accident?
Mikami: Yes, but they only had minor injuries.... God?!...
Page 13
Light: You were in over your head Near before all of this began.
Near thinking: You cant be serious?!
Near: Mr. Mogi shoot Kira now before its too late.
Mogi: What?!
Near: Commander Rester, kill Mikami as well.
Rester: ?!
Near: Kill them now! Or they will escape!
Mogi: But ?
(Grabs Light and pulls out his gun)
Rester: Right now?!
Near: Yes!
Page 14
Mikami: God, Im your servant always.
Rester: Good bye Mika .
Rester: Arrrrg!
(Rester hits the ground)
Near: Shoot them!
Gevanni: Com...
(Gevanni falls over on Mikami)
Mikami: Ah!
Light thinking: If Near had not said what would be done to us, he may have lived longer... but, as it stands... Mikami's Shinigami overheard his remarks about us being executed... I need to get underneath someone, that way I wont be shot.
Mogi: Light?!
Mogi: Arrrrg
Page 15
(Mogi falls on Light)
Mogi thinking: No
(Light holds Mogi on his back and starts to move towards the door)
Aizawa: Shit Lights going to get away !
Aizawa: Matsuda shoot him!
Aizawa thinking: ...damn it
(Aizawa falls over)
Matsuda: No Light! Dont leave!
Matsuda: I dont want you
(Matsuda grabs his chest)
Matsuda: to go
(Matsuda falls over)
Page 16
Near: Lidner, what are you doing?
Lidner: But...
(Lidner falls over)
Page 17
Near: Fuck!
Light: Looks like youre done Near.
Near: Not yet
(Near falls over)
Near thinking: No! .
Page 18
Near thinking: Kira
Near thinking: ...this time
Near thinking: Youre... dead...
Near thinking: Mello... L... ...I didnt act...
Page 19
(At a hole in the Shinigami's Realm)
(A Notebook is on top of a mound of dust)
Page 20
(Two Days Later)
(Computer screen clicks on at SPK's HQ)
Screen: Pi Pi Pi
Screen: Pi Pi
Screen: Pi
Screen: Piiiiiiiiiiip
Screen: .
Screen: Transmission in progress...
Page 21
TV Screen: I am L.
End of Part 2
Page 01
Light: Hahahahaha
Light: Yes, I am Kira.
Light: You should be proud
Light: Near.
Page 02
Light: Youre the first person to catch me.
Matsuda:
Light: Mikami, your intentions were good, but I value absolute obedience over assistance.
Light: But I will let you live.
Mikami thinking: God ! You havent forsaken me..
SPK: ?!
Page 03
Death Note Page 105 Impossible
With his might in one hand and his pride in the other, he towers over the earth.
Page 04
Near thinking: I will let you live, is that even something that he can say in a situation like this?
Near thinking: No, I havent made any mistakes, everything is in place.
Near thinking: I left myself no openings, even if he tries something .
Near thinking: Kira is done Yagami Light is finished.
Near thinking: He has absolutely no merit to what he said.
Near: You are hardly in a position to say I will let you live.
SPK:
NPA:
Page 05
Light: Near, you need to reflect on what you just said.
Light: You are nothing but trash to me without Mello at your side.
Near:
Light: You should have looked deeper into why I chose Mikami as my servant.
Light: Yes, its true that he seems to be loyal to me in every way .
Light: but almost everyone is loyal to their God.
Page 06
Light: Well, just like you gave me a clue, Im sure you only need to hear one word to figure out what Im talking about.
Near:
SPK:
Light: Shinigami.
NPA: ?
Near:
Light: Ryuk, please explain to Near what a Shinigami does?
Ryuk: ?
Page 07
Ryuk: Sure. Although I dont see the point in this.
Ryuk: A Shinigami lives off of the lifespan of humans.
Ryuk: Shinigami use the notebook to kill a human.
Near thinking: thats good to know, but what does that matter?
Ryuk thinking: Why does Light want me to tell this to them?
Ryuk thinking: This wont buy him much time
Light: Continue on Ryuk.
Page 08
Ryuk: By killing a human with the notebook, the Shinigami increases their life by the years the human would have had left to live.
Near:
Near thinking: Increases their lifespan by killing a human .
Near thinking: Is he saying were cattle to Shinigami?
Near thinking: No, that is already too obvious . He cant be talking about something this Shinigami will do, is he?
Near: Mr. Shinigami.
Ryuk: Yes?
Near: Are you going to kill us?
NPA & SPK: !What!?
Page 09
Ryuk: hyuk hyuk hyuk
Ryuk: Nope, I have no intention of interfering.
Ryuk: Although I can, I dont care enough about whats happening to kill you guys.
Aizawa thinking: Thats good But why is Light mentioning this?
Aizawa thinking: Whatever the case, Light should not be able to do a thing
Matsuda: Man, thats good to know Ryuk.
Matsuda: So youve decided to go with us?
Ryuk: Matsuda, youre an idiot, did you not just hear what I said?
Ryuk: I dont care what happens to anyone. But if I were to kill anyone, youd be the first.
Matsuda: sorry
Page 10
Light: Have you figured it out yet, Near?
Near thinking: Another Shinigami?
Near thinking: It cant be . Mikami couldnt have a Shinigami
Near thinking: There was only that notebook
Near thinking: Plus, I thoroughly looked through Mikamis background
Near thinking: There was no sign of him ever having a notebook There must be more to this... he might be using this conversation to mask some sort of plan of his... I need to pay close attention to his hands,... just in case he tries to write something.
Near: No I havent, so please enlighten me.
Page 11
Light: Fuhahaha
SPK & NPA: .
Light: I suppose it was a bit much of me to expect you to catch it, especially since its a lot easier to catch if youve used the notebook as long as I have.
Light: Mikami.
Mikami: !Yes God?!
Light: What happened to your Mother?
Mikami thinking: My Mother?!
Mikami: She died in a car accident when I was a child.
Page 12
Light: Who was she killed by?
Mikami: She was killed by the kids who use to bully me in school.
Mikami: They also died along with her.
Light: Were there anyone else involved in the accident?
Mikami: Yes, but they only had minor injuries.... God?!...
Page 13
Light: You were in over your head Near before all of this began.
Near thinking: You cant be serious?!
Near: Mr. Mogi shoot Kira now before its too late.
Mogi: What?!
Near: Commander Rester, kill Mikami as well.
Rester: ?!
Near: Kill them now! Or they will escape!
Mogi: But ?
(Grabs Light and pulls out his gun)
Rester: Right now?!
Near: Yes!
Page 14
Mikami: God, Im your servant always.
Rester: Good bye Mika .
Rester: Arrrrg!
(Rester hits the ground)
Near: Shoot them!
Gevanni: Com...
(Gevanni falls over on Mikami)
Mikami: Ah!
Light thinking: If Near had not said what would be done to us, he may have lived longer... but, as it stands... Mikami's Shinigami overheard his remarks about us being executed... I need to get underneath someone, that way I wont be shot.
Mogi: Light?!
Mogi: Arrrrg
Page 15
(Mogi falls on Light)
Mogi thinking: No
(Light holds Mogi on his back and starts to move towards the door)
Aizawa: Shit Lights going to get away !
Aizawa: Matsuda shoot him!
Aizawa thinking: ...damn it
(Aizawa falls over)
Matsuda: No Light! Dont leave!
Matsuda: I dont want you
(Matsuda grabs his chest)
Matsuda: to go
(Matsuda falls over)
Page 16
Near: Lidner, what are you doing?
Lidner: But...
(Lidner falls over)
Page 17
Near: Fuck!
Light: Looks like youre done Near.
Near: Not yet
(Near falls over)
Near thinking: No! .
Page 18
Near thinking: Kira
Near thinking: ...this time
Near thinking: Youre... dead...
Near thinking: Mello... L... ...I didnt act...
Page 19
(At a hole in the Shinigami's Realm)
(A Notebook is on top of a mound of dust)
Page 20
(Two Days Later)
(Computer screen clicks on at SPK's HQ)
Screen: Pi Pi Pi
Screen: Pi Pi
Screen: Pi
Screen: Piiiiiiiiiiip
Screen: .
Screen: Transmission in progress...
Page 21
TV Screen: I am L.
End of Part 2
so I'm not the only that absolutely HATE Near??
