First Try ~.~

Xiphias

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I know this doesnt really belong here but I thought you guys could give me some critcism.. It's not done fully done I have to redo some lines and stuff ~.~ but I was hoping you could you know say some stuff this is my first try at this kinda thing btw.

Mine
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/7294/38136copyfj6.jpg
// didn't know what to do with the box ~.~ should i get rid of the writing or leave it?

Original
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/9192/38136uw6.jpg

Fixed the edit was to dark in some areas ~.~
 

ThE WoRm

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Well, the place for this is the MH Academy forum up in the forums list here in MH, I myself am not used to criticize people on those things, so I don't have what to say ^^"
 

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Good try~

XD

But seriously,

Air Gear Mag-scans are terrible o_o It'd be suicide to edit from non-tankou copies -_-; AG is freaking hard to do XD :D

1 thing though, black should be black, white should be white... AG has too many grey shades so I don't know if it's a good idea to edit out the greys XD o_o :D

blah blah,

gtg to school XD

~_~
 

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Ok...

Used a differnt method to level it this time.
Tried to clean it a bit more. // Forgot 2 dots in lower right did in like 1 min.
I messed up the house imo...
Touched up the nose and the one wheel ~.~

http://i10.tinypic.com/3zrmatc.jpg
 

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i donno much about this either but i think ur first try was better and decent quality well atleast WAY better then the original scan
 

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seriosuly, excellent try. Especially since its hard to do editing and filling in.
 

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I'm not expert in editing, but i can talk about the images' look :P

The first one is good, really, but there is something about it that don't work (i don't know how to explain, but it's about the black areas).

The second one is perfect. I sincerely think that it exactly "the raw cleaned". Only way to have a better image than that is trying to have a better raw :P

Gratz
 

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what s/w do ya use guys for translating and cleaning raw scans?
kinda intersting
 
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