fox attempts Training Ground #1

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How Is It? I'm Still A Noob At This. Sorry If You Don't Want Me To Type Like This But I Can't Help It.

 

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Nicely done. There are some spots of gray on his eye and face and some spots in his hair that need to be black. You used the tools properly without doing to much damage to the lines. I give this one a pass.

I am sorry it took me so long to respond to your post. This week has been an exceptionally busy one.
 

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where is the training ground? oh and real good for a noob
 

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you have a bunch of faded lines, some dust in his hair and the frame isnt redrawn. I mean good try but you need work. Don't worry with practice comes the experience you need to fix the problems
 

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neji66 said:
where is the training ground? oh and real good for a noob
The training grounds are under the tutorials section of this section of the MH site. They are tutorials that have been in use at Jinchuuriki at one time. Though they have either been revamped or are in the process of being revamped at this time.

NeoShweaty said:
you have a bunch of faded lines, some dust in his hair and the frame isnt redrawn. I mean good try but you need work. Don't worry with practice comes the experience you need to fix the problems
The tutorial Fox was following only deals with the blacks, whites and white detail lines. At Jinchuuriki we use a mutli-stage process for our training. And while you are correct about the things you pointed out they were not taught in this tutorial.
 

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Well I’m no expert but I like it!
 

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oh, i see alla. I just called it like i saw it. Didnt mean anything by it
 

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NeoShweaty said:
oh, i see alla. I just called it like i saw it. Didnt mean anything by it
I know you didn't. No worries. I just wanted those that were also helping out with MH Academy to know that these tutorials from Jinchuuriki, were never designed to cover a complete cleaning. It's to easy to get lost in one detail and lose sight of another that way so we work at getting good at the basic stuff first then work into seeing the other things that are missed.
 

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the naruto logo isnt cleaned
 
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