fox's first clean!

fox

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Well, this is my first clean. I decided to try it out. Turned out better than I thought. Anything I need to improve?
 

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Looks really nice. But the boxed need to be redrawn. Especially the 4th panel because there is a part of the old frame. And some frames look a bit faded ( for example 2nd panel left side). Well keep on with that.
 

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hmm not bad , if you follow the monkey *cough*des*cough*'s tips you'd get better :D
 

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you could also do the white stroke around the guys' head a bit better :)
 

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...yeah...what they said ^^
Anyway, there are some grey dusts here and there (especially in the third panel). You might wanna get rid of those. However, this page is already overlevelled, so you might want to get rid of those by "coloring" them. And, like they said, the old borders have to be erased, and new ones have to be redrawn. You also might want to resize your page to the proper sizes.

Other than those stuff, pretty good ^^
 
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