My first Clean Evar

[darkshador]

Hi guys. This is my first clean ever in my life I read some tutorials and I tryed to clean a page from Naruto. If you rate it pls tell me what I could've done better.

Rate it pls.

RAW: http://img220.imageshack.us/my.php?image=335011bi5br4.jpg
CLEAN: http://img220.imageshack.us/my.php?image=335011bi5copytv6.jpg

 

[Assymilum]

It's overleveled, really. Well, at least it's good that you redraw the whites. Did you just level everything to make the speckles go away or did you burn? If you just leveled and say that burning is too hard, then try using denoising programs like NeatImage or Topaz Vivacity. They'll help make burning a whole lot easier and *mostly* prevent it to be overleveled. Make sure the settings are all right, though.

Borders are too thick. Usually, the size of the borders are around 2-3 pixels only. Too thick and it'll be dame-dame desu.

Keep trying! Practice makes perfect.

 

[neobody]

+1 Assymilum. Obviously it's overleveled, and the image was slightly slanted. As Assymilum stated the borders are too thick, and i think it was due to the "Overleveling".

Good Try, and try harder next time~ Never Give up!

 

[darkshador]

Yeah that's what I thought. It's overleveled and I knew that when I finished xD But thx for commenting it and I will try and do another one.

 

[phat43va]

Hey your image links don't work. I'm Poet from the group, "Kindan no Aku." If you want to join a scanslation group, you're welcome at KnA. We can tutor you and provide materials to be a editor. Send me a message if you want to join.

 

[1211]

His links work fine though..

 

[phat43va]

Ok, I figured why I wasn't getting them. I had to reload the website again just to see the picture. The raw is pretty bad so yeah, great job on cleaning it. In your work, everything looks black... lol. But again, the raw is pretty bad.

 

[1211]

With some practice and some help you'll be able to do even that bad raw like this:

Spoiler

 

[phat43va]

1211, your work is good. I'd say it'd be a MQ/HQ. However, I think you over burnt some things that are supposed to be white lines. Because the white lines are thin, when you burn, it easily fades to black. So, be careful next time and know where the white lines should be.

 

[emer]

Is that really your doing, 1211? (Hi ner >: D)
About the clean (in first post)
*Resize : D a good way to make it all look smooth, use it alot ^^
That also helps the "overleveling" mentioned earlier, as all lines are (pardon my french) fucked : /
*Way to thick lines for the frames... : 3

Good otherwise ^^