My first clean

[Leena]

Well, this is the RAW I used for my first cleaning attempt and what I managed to make out of it:



Please give some critics / advice on what I didn't do that good and how to improve it.

I know the grays are not that good, but everything else I tried looked even worse.
And I'm not really satisfied with the lines around the bubbles in the lowest panel, too,
although i spent a lot of time on them.
So I would espacily like to know how to do this two things better.

Thanks in advance for any kind of feedback.

 

[VASSiLi]

I think that you do a nice clean ^^

 

[Waeyen]

Das is doch mal HQ
Wirklich unglaublich für deinen ersten Clean!

Ich finde das du da nichts verbessern musst^^
Mach aufjedenfall weiter so

 

[zidane]

ehm yeah...
how long did it took you to do that?

and also, you should add some noise to the grays...japflap for example use 4%, though it's not naruto
in this case...

anyway, noise on the grays is the only thing that i'd change...

EXCELLENT JOB!

edit: oh, and the pic size...1200px height is mostly used by scan groups...

edit 2: and about the lines...have you tried the "line tool" on them?
just read the pm - we can talk in detail about that later...

 

[Dr4G0nZ]

Same here, just wondering how long you took to do it...
Because it's pretty damn awesome, looks like you put A LOT of effort in it!

 

[Leena]

First of all thanks to everyone for the comments.
I was really happy to her you all liked it.

And yes, I did spend a lot of effort on the picture.
All in all I needed two whole evenings to make this picture,
but most of the time I need on experimenting how to do something the best
and on undoing some really silly mistaks.

 

[THE KING]

Too good, and it's ur 1st
U have a lot of talent.

Some texture on the grays will really make it look flawless.

 

[nxlouco]

Yup! Awesome Clean, Although its Time Consuming Having A Team To Do HQ Scans of One Piece, as We Have Of Naruto And Bleach, Would Be Great!