its good to see you post an original. the faults are mainly anatomical, due to the perspective i suppose. try to look at real-life photos or similar drawings by more experienced artists to find out what you should do differently.
i have to say, i also agree with pineappleherb (actually he put all my thoughts of late into words). the reason i so rarely submit art or colorings to the MH forum is that i dont benefit from it in any sense. i mean, how can you improve from hearing only "good", "great", "awesome", or "holyshitwillyoumarrymeandhavemykids"?
so please, lets work together and be a little more constructive, and it will be beneficial to all! next time you (everyone) comment on an artwork, try to put a little more into it than just one of the above!
thats all i had to say.
