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I know that I'm beginner in drawing and not all is correct, but I would like to hear it from you :p

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well, it looks alright. its a neat little drawing, and you should be proud of it

howeva, if you wanna know whats wrong with it, the anatomy, mostly. i understand everyone on here is used to good responses no matter what they show (especially you, your colorings are some of the best here), but it needs a lot of work

if you're going for your own style or whatever, then screw it, do whatever you want :amuse , but if you wanna make it looks awesome, copy one of these

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/7029/narutoch003ch245p01specrp6.jpg

good luck man :guns
 

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Good job!!!:amuse
It's a great fanart style!!!:)
I give you 5 stars for that!!!:D
 

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its good to see you post an original. the faults are mainly anatomical, due to the perspective i suppose. try to look at real-life photos or similar drawings by more experienced artists to find out what you should do differently.

i have to say, i also agree with pineappleherb (actually he put all my thoughts of late into words). the reason i so rarely submit art or colorings to the MH forum is that i dont benefit from it in any sense. i mean, how can you improve from hearing only "good", "great", "awesome", or "holyshitwillyoumarrymeandhavemykids"?

so please, lets work together and be a little more constructive, and it will be beneficial to all! next time you (everyone) comment on an artwork, try to put a little more into it than just one of the above!

thats all i had to say. :)
 

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i have to say, i also agree with pineappleherb (actually he put all my thoughts of late into words). the reason i so rarely submit art or colorings to the MH forum is that i dont benefit from it in any sense. i mean, how can you improve from hearing only "good", "great", "awesome", or "holyshitwillyoumarrymeandhavemykids"?
No comments... that's true)))
 

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was there something here? I dont see anything
 

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Glad you're trying to draw your own art now. Since you're good at coloring, and you work with art a lot already, developing your own original art shouldn't be to difficult. Just pay attention to the best advice given to you, and keep practicing. The more time you put into developing your own art, the better. I'm sure we'll be seeing some very cool art from you soon. Even your future Naruto chapters were well drawn, so keep doing what you do.
 

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cool!
 
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