Prince of Tennis 342 pg 1 cleaned

MagicBunny

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This is my attempt at editing/cleaning a page and i was wondering how i did.

This is the original


My attempt at cleaning


PLz offer some feedback
 

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I think it looks really good. If only the scans I translate were that clean. It would make the transcribing process before I translate a lot easier lol
 

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Could you please re-size it to 1200, it's easier to judge that way.

The things I can tell mostly from this size are that your borders need to be re-done, it looks like you tried, and put complete borders around the panels. There shouldn't be any at the edges of the panels that touch the edge of the page. The whites still have dust in them. In the third panel, that rectangular part of the wall touching the edge of the page should be white.

The re-drawing looks pretty good from what I can see at this size.
 

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Ill follow your advice. This was really only practice to c if i was doing good or not
 
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