Rating pls (Naruto 351 pg 01)

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Hi, could anyone rate this pls? This is the first page I ever cleaned.
 

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Well, for starters your page is the wrong size by 4 px. This is probably due to not cropping it after rotating it. You leveled the page well. Your whites are pretty clean. Your blacks aren't filled in correctly, and I can easily tell where they need to be filled. you need to stroke your white lines. Some of the black lines need to be stroked for consistency reasons.

all in all it's a decent clean.
 
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