Discussion Re-write the Alvarez Arc

[OharaLibrarian]

Do you intend to do Fiore mages vs Acnologia or you're keeping to Dragons Slayers vs Acnologia ?

Both! Slayers will be the main focus, while everyone else will help them out later on. This is everyone's battle, not just Natsu's

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The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 36

• Chapter 36: Angels and Dragons
  
• Chapter 36 Afterword

@Takuan
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

 

[King of kings]

Hiro why......just why....look at this dude , he making this manga whyyyyy better than you.

--- Double Post Merged, Jul 23, 2017, Original Post Date: Jul 23, 2017 ---

Both! Slayers will be the main focus, while everyone else will help them out later on. This is everyone's battle, not just Natsu's

--- Double Post Merged, Jul 23, 2017, Original Post Date: Jul 23, 2017 ---

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 36

• Chapter 36: Angels and Dragons
  
• Chapter 36 Afterword

@Takuan
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

Can you make one of God slayers and is God Serena going appear there?

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Can you do the hakai technique?

 

[Takuan]

Huh, i finally caught up to the rewrite. I had been busy and postponed the reading of it, but it was well worth the wait. This is absolutely amazing.

 

[OharaLibrarian]

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 37
It finally begins, my favorite fight so far: the battle of the slayers!

• Chapter 37: Seven Versus One
  
• Chapter 37 Afterword

@Takuan
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

 

[Takuan]

I've been so disappointed by Irene in the manga, but she's the real MVP of your rewrite.
Even Cobra had a shining moment versus Acno, and the twin brothers.... Damn. Too good.

 

[Ebony Maw]

DAMN! This is so hype!

Dude, I can't even explain how amazing this is, especially after how Acnologia went out in canon. The Twin Dragons and Cobra getting to shine is awesome, can't wait to see how the newest combatant will fare.

 

[OharaLibrarian]

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 38
Releases might slow down a little (as in, every three days instead of two) because there are still some things that need to be tweaked last minute, sorry about that.

• Chapter 38: The Eight Dragon
  
• Chapter 38 Afterword

Next time the best chapter period in terms of coreography!
@Takuan
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

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The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 39
My favorite chapter bar none in terms of choreography, seven dragon force slayers vs Acno!

• Chapter 39: A Dragon's Force
  
• Chapter 39 Afterword

@Takuan
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

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The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 40
From here, five more chapters to go! we're reaching the finale!

• Chapter 40: Ragnarök
  
• Chapter 40 Afterword

@Takuan
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

 

[Takuan]

Irene is such a boss in your rewrite. She's even a bit too OP maybe xD
That was fucking hype dude, i'm looking forward to the rest of it

 

[kkck]

I can't see any images after irene transforms in chapter 40.

 

[Anti Hero 3:16]

By the way I got to ask you this in your power scaling where will you put END in august and irene tier ( stronger than laxus and gildarts) or even stronger than two strongest spriggans.

 

[rai_darkness]

I loved these chapters! I wonder how they will fight Acnologia at his full power. What happened with Fairy Heart after Zeref's death? Maybe Irene will use her Historia of the Dead to also bring there Zeref, and then enchant the Dragon Slayers with Fairy Heart...? Zeref will be able to apologize to Natsu.
That was hype! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

 

[Bishamonten]

If I was a good writer, I would want to adapt this rewrite in a text format. Of course with supervision with you, Mr. author

It is soon near the end but you did really a good job!

 

[LaGOAT]

yo theses chapters are way better than the original if this was canon i would have fall in love with FT like i did back in a day!! yo author this is great writing which make perfect sense no BS im really enjoying it keep up the good work!!!

 

[Valhalla]

Lol This fight against Acnologia is 100 times better than the fight in the original. Yo what the hell, that was epic.

 

[OharaLibrarian]

Irene is such a boss in your rewrite. She's even a bit too OP maybe xD
That was fucking hype dude, i'm looking forward to the rest of it

Thanks man! And don't worry, Irene runs out of magic power next chapter, which balances out all she's done

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By the way I got to ask you this in your power scaling where will you put END in august and irene tier ( stronger than laxus and gildarts) or even stronger than two strongest spriggans.

That's tough to say. e.n.d. vastly outdoes August and Irene (he went head to head with FH Zeref), but the other two have a lot more versatility with their magic, so it's possible they might defeat e.n.d. by means of other strategies. A tough match for sure.

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If I was a good writer, I would want to adapt this rewrite in a text format. Of course with supervision with you, Mr. author

It is soon near the end but you did really a good job!

yo theses chapters are way better than the original if this was canon i would have fall in love with FT like i did back in a day!! yo author this is great writing which make perfect sense no BS im really enjoying it keep up the good work!!!

Lol This fight against Acnologia is 100 times better than the fight in the original. Yo what the hell, that was epic.

Thank you, I appreciate it

--- Double Post Merged, Aug 5, 2017 ---

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 41
Four more chapters to go!

• Chapter 41: The Dragon of the Apocalypse
  
• Chapter 41 Afterword

Next time, color cover and 40+ pages of a thrilling finale! Humanity's battle against Acnologia reaches it's climax!
@Takuan
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

 

[Anti Hero 3:16]

I like it, you are letting everyone from side characters to antagonists to main characters everyone showing some good feats and there true strengths. That's very well done, not to say you have given in depth to acnologia's character which was not done in the main manga. Safe to say this is far far better than the actual manga. You definitely have a great talents in storywriting. congrats
Man you are awesome not only you gave in depth to acnologia's character but you also gave a consoling moment for natsu and zeref, which was perfectly done natsu looks like a true mvp of this fight in a good way and gave zeref some good feats and ending to not to say dragonising natsu is the least BS way to finish this fight. I would give this chapter a perfect 10.
Awesome bro keep it up.

 

[King of kings]

I like it, you are letting everyone from side characters to antagonists to main characters everyone showing some good feats and there true strengths. That's very well done, not to say you have given in depth to acnologia's character which was not done in the main manga. Safe to say this is far far better than the actual manga. You definitely have a great talents in storywriting. congrats
Man you are awesome not only you gave in depth to acnologia's character but you also gave a consoling moment for natsu and zeref, which was perfectly done natsu looks like a true mvp of this fight in a good way and gave zeref some good feats and ending to not to say dragonising natsu is the least BS way to finish this fight. I would give this chapter a perfect 10.
Awesome bro keep it up.

If Hiro went this route , FT would be better than the big three shounen.

 

[Anti Hero 3:16]

If Hiro went this route , FT would be better than the big three shounen.

No doubt it would be good enough to be in that league. Frankly speaking this is much enjoyable to read in contrast to the original one.

 

[kkck]

NIce chapters. Wasted a chance to introduce a drunk dragon or alcohol element though. DRUNK DRAGON FIST! ALCOHOL DRAGON FIST! DRUNK DRAGONS ALCOHOLIC DRAGON ALCOHOLOC *hic* FIST DRAGON!

 

[Demon Hunter]

better than the original ofc though Zeref teaching Acnologia is crap tbh.

I was like

in the original one, Zeref being surprised at human Acnologia was actually good.