sasuke chidori, coloured

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Pretty good; although the toes look...odd? for some reason.
 

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pretty good too. after checking the feet-- yeah-- the left looks odd but not too bad,

The lighting strands look quite well done-- but a little too extended from the source (sasuke's hand)

Good job. i love it.
 

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The lightning looks a bit "fat". In my humble opinion, it should be a bit thinner, but then again, I am not an expert so ....anything. Apart from that, it's good shading and effect overall. I like it.
 

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Eileen said:
The lightning looks a bit "fat"...
i agree lol!!. You put it in better words than i did. my usage of "extended" was for both width (fat) and total length.
 
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