The Character Thread

[gdupninja]

True, alright maybe Ill chose to be Winter Sokaro's favorite student. He seems like a pretty twisted guy. Ill stop procrastinating and post my full character tomarrow since I only have like 20 minutes left on the computer. I was thinking he could start off in some snowy place and fight a group of akuma outside of a church. Then he can get on a train and do whatever. Im just thinking of quirks he can have. He can be a big eater because he has a parasite type and he can do what Ling Yao from FMA does which is collapse on the ground and act like he is starving so people will feed him.

 

[Djmewmew]

........XD
omg heck yeah!!!! <3

 

[gdupninja]

Well here he is
Name- Sahsa Kuznetsov
Age- 17

Appearance- 6'1, he is in perfect physical condition largely due to the fact that General Sokaro put him through rigorous physical training. He has light brown hair worn similar to L from deathnote. He has green eyes. He wears the standard Black Order form because Sokaro took him to HQ the last time he checked in.

Bio- Sasha was born an orphan in the slums of Russia. He was found in a trash can by a nun who ran an orphanage. their she rasied him along with a few other orphans. Their childhood was harsh as they had very liitle money and their living conditions were horrible. When he was 10 the orphanage was set on fire and burned down. The children were left homeless. A few days later The nun Sister Kozlov suffered a heart attack and died. One of the children was approached by the Earl who was on his way back to Japan. The child agreed to turn the nun into an akuma. Upon creation she attacked the boy and the rest of the children killing all acept Sasha who during the attack activated his innocence for the first time and destroyed her. Sasha fled the city and soon joined up with a band of teenage orphans. He traveled with them and struggled to survive for 4 years. One day in Eastern Russia the survivng teens were attacked by akuma who targeted Sasha's innocence. Sasha using his innocence once again struggled to fend off the level 2 akumas. then out of no where him and the rest of the orphans were rescued by a man wearing a metal mask. The man turned ot to be General Winters Sokaro. He gave the group money and offered to train Sasha. After telling Sasha about innocence and the war Sahsa accepted the mans offer and became his pupil. Sokaro mentored the boy for 3 years and commented that he was his most talented student and that he would indeed become as his name suggested a " defender of mankind". Despite going to HQ and being recongnized as an excorsist he continued to travel with his general. Sokaro sent Sasha to the Black Order branch in North america. Sokaro then left to join the other generals in Hq.

Personality- Sasa is a very kind hearted and likeable boy, as well as a smooth talker. He will go at any lengths to protect his comrades. Despite being mentored by the harsh Sokaro, Sahsa forgives mistakes and is not afraid of making them. He will never leave a comrade behind, and he will always fight to the death to fulfill his duty as an apostle of god.

Combat skills- In addition to being able to use his innocence ,Sasha Is very skilled in martial arts and hand to hand combat.

Innocence type - parasite(havent thought of a name yet)
Description- 3 crosses are embedded on the excorsists left side of their chest and upper rib cage. Once invoked they each take the form of animal face mask
mask1- A dragons head. This mask is able to extend from the users body. It can shoot flames and bite akuma.
Mask2- A bulls head. It functions as a canon that can fire energy
Mask3- A serpent. This mask is used for long range attacks. It can extend from the users body. The mouth and sides of the serpents body are covered with a blade so it functions as a sword type weapon

What do you guys think? is there anything i have to change?

 

[rhapsody blue]

i think your character is fine but i think you should add his character's flaws so we know the whole side of Sasha. ^^

 

[gdupninja]

true, true Ill do it.
i kinda rushed so ill add these to my other post.
The use of his innocence greatly drains his energy, So he must eat loads of food before or after fighting. At his current syncronization rate he can only attack with one mask at a time, the use of 2 or more at the same time will drain his energy further. For example all his masks are active but he can only use one at a time meaning he can use his bull canon and the use his dragon to attack but using them at the same time would would be very costly and he could easily over exert himself.

He is easliy manipulated by girls. He is bad with names. Sometimes when he does not have enough money and he is hungry he will collapse on the ground and act like he is starving so that someone will come and feed him.
He cannot read or write.

Wow thats alot that I didn't add at first sorry i was gonna add it later though. Anything else that I need.

 

[rhapsody blue]

i think it sounds good now so thanks for the info

 

[Schwindelmagier]

Yeah, a nice and cool character with advantages and disadvantages ^^

 

[rosalefay]

Coolie, he's so gonna get used by half the NA Order, cuz they're almost all girls. xDDD He seems pretty sweet, though.

 

[gdupninja]

Thanks I guess he will be the Black Order boy toy from now on.

 

[Schwindelmagier]

when creativity comes back, I will draw your character. ^^
L's hairstyle and a strong body yet a handsome smile.

 

[gdupninja]

Yep thats about right. I have a picture of his innocence in my head when he reaches 100% synchronization rate. Wow Im thinking oh something awsome but thats a long time from now. I cant wait to see your drawing!

 

[Schwindelmagier]

I will do my best. Yakusoku ne.

 

[Ponera]

Sounds all interesting <3
I think i'll go through the whole thing too =)
I like writing and also reading. In chase i get hooked, i'll post my character too.

So, i was writing a story with my mother once (she's a D.Gray-man Fan too) and i had the idea of an Innocence, that transformed himself into a human (or he's at least human-like, more like an elf, though), a long time ago and hides within the civilian, because he doesn't want to be carried around by others, or, to be exact: carried by humans.
He thinks of humans that they are weak. Stubborn, very self-confident and a hang to sarcasm.

It's a while back and i think i haven't the files anymore q_q
Well, i'll take a look on it first anyway ^^

 

[rhapsody blue]

hi, Johnny_Gil!

i'm glad that you're interested in the story. however, there are a lot of characters and writers right now that your character might get lost in the mix. why don't you wait a bit until we can ensure that every character gets a chance to be developed and written about properly?

your character and story sound interesting but i think it's best to post your stories at the fanfics & stories forum since this is more like an rpg story.

 

[Schwindelmagier]

Snooge and I agreed that it might be good not to add any new characters to the story for the time being. We should deal with our current ones, also because some of them do not receive the attention they should. Sahsa Kuznetsov is the last new added character.

I hope you all agree with us because we have a huge amount of characters, f.e. 21 active exorcists and bookman. Lol.

 

[rhapsody blue]

I hope you all agree with us because we have a huge amount of characters, f.e. 21 active exorcists and bookman. Lol.

21!?!?! do we really have that much? i think that's even more than hoshino's dgm.

 

[rosalefay]

Holy snap. 0___0 21?!?! And that's not even including Finders and/or staff. =0

 

[Schwindelmagier]

Yeah, as we said, it's quite a lot. so we should stop thinking about new characters for the time being.

 

[rhapsody blue]

my sister drew lyra in her new uniform and shawn.

Spoiler: lyra

it was hard to "exorcify" her uniform

Spoiler: shawn & his briefcase

she might draw sam if she has time.

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hope you guys don't if we aka ds, my sister, and i modified riena's weapon because we think the katana does not really suit her.

we think the butterfly sword fits her perfectly due to her personality and skills. not to mention we think the swords are pretty. lol

we also like how she could hide the weapons in her sleeves or boots so if anyone is going to design her uniform, keep that in mind.

 

[Schwindelmagier]

Butterfly swords are a nice choice. I also think they suit better. Moreover, I think an Innocent would act different from user to user (if this was possible xD).