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I have to write if I'm for or agaisnt the war in Iraq...but I have to at least igve two points for the opposing side. I cant really find any point for the war...do you have any ideas?
 

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Well I had debate class and we had to give 3 minute speeches all the time so your talking to the right guy. Well one reason is to try and stop terrorism. the other might be that we can take them from communism and turn them into a democratic aly
 

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Hmm, it totally forgot about stopping terrorism, but Iraq is not communist...we're working on making them democratic,but they have no real working government right now.

Thanks for the help ^^
 

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Well Bush said he wanted to make them a democratic aly so thats where i got that and werent they communist before the war. Anyway I have reasons for all the different arguements because we had debates every week in that class. Anyway good luck with the essay. Do you want to hear about my short story.
 

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Iraq I think had a dictatorship not a communist system. Casue Saddam wanted everything for himself and not evenly share the products with everyone.

Anyway sure I would like to hear about your short story.
 

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Oh yeah your right. Forgot about that. who the hell told me it was a communist government.
Anyway it will start out with a dude and his girlfriend. They will be lured into a diner by someone posing as one of the girls friends. they will become unconscious and find themselves in a room with a bunch of other people. Its like gantz cause there will be a box in the room and a computer will be nearby. Suddenly the computer will start giving them orders and printing out directions. they will walk out of the room and find themselves in an abandned city. they will face obsticales kinda like gantz and saw. finally the survivors will be confronted by the girls friend who turns out to be an alien imposter. they will find out that they were kidnapped by aliens and that a bunch of them are watching them for entertainment
 

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Cool, that sound like a good story. But your just mixing Gratz with Saw and the movie that has prisoners fight for their freedom while people watch it on T.V.
 

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Ture but im not done thinking yet. Thats just what i thought of so far. Im gonna swich it up a bit. I dont wanna bite off of those two too much. My teacher and classmates dont know about gantz but i still wanna be original.
 

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Yea, but still its a cool story, dont change it that much. I would totally read it if you wrote it.

Are you good at making up stories on the spot?
 

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I like to think so. Writng is my best subject. My teacher is in charge of the literary magazine and she wants me to put 2 of my poems in there. She also really liked my cowboy bebop essay that i told yall about. So yeah i can make up stories.
 

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Wow thats so cool your poems in a magazine, nice :hi5

I used to have the ability to make stories on the spot, thats how I got out of so many problems, but I havent used it in a long time..
 

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its not really that hard. You should see the journals she makes us right in our notebooks. I am without a doubt the class clown. You wanna hear another funny idea.
 

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Lol, sure
 

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HAHA this one is crazy.
It takes place in 2030. A man hijacks a limosine filled with girls cominmg back from a sweet sixteen.He makes the driver roll around the city while he kills people. He is kinda scary because he wears a tall black coat and a black hat. The reason why he kills the people is because they cant dress. He is Versace Cabachi the fashion assainian. He punishes those who have bad taste in fashion. He makes the driver go to various places like the mall ,a basketball game, and the club. He threatens to kill the girls if they try to tell on him.
 

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Omg lol thats hilarious, but you should have made the girl from the sweet sixteen be with them to and she gets shot in the end.

well I better get home my last class is done, I'll be home around 4-5P.M. PST Its 2:53 right now so two hours from now...what a pain to go home.
 

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Maybe ill use your idea. thanks. Alright then see ya.
 

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Lol. It must sound girly like The Lily of Eternity...something like that, just think of the opposite of what you might want imp-kun!


No I dont read Grantz, what is it about?
lily of eternity... :amuse... that's too girl... :s im not that girly... :notrust

its gantz... but it is good... the story anyway... but i bet the only thing the guys look at is the nudity there.... :darn

:oh
Is it weird that i find the name weirdly attractive...>_>
okay impy-chan.... :oh really you like it... :oh



Well i never got past the fourth chapter, simply because the nude hot girl put on some clothes, which in my book is bad writing!
see what did i tell ya... :notrust
What?! nudity! Nice I'm so reading that.
:oh

Nice Sig and Avi btw Foxx, your really catching up with bax for best graphics maker of the forum.
your siggy is really nice! :wtf i like it spider-man! :XD that 3rd movie didn't come out as good as i thought it would though... :oh
You are trying to brainwash her....
@lilinator - that is why i gave you a cool name lil, Zwivix wouldnt think of brainwashing someone with a cool name.......but you said no, so know he is trying to brainwash you with his....
brainwash....? :oh eh?
Mwahahahaha, now she will be all mine for the taking, she will become my ultimate weapon. The Liliy of Death!
:XD hey that could be a good one. better than lily of enternity anyway. i'll be glad to take that as my title. :kukuku
 

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Maybe ill use your idea. thanks. Alright then see ya.
Well I wouldnt call that idea that good, but you should some how get the girl from the sweet seixteen involved in the story. :amuse
lily of eternity... :amuse... that's too girl... :s im not that girly... :notrust
Aww, well that's good to know *scribbles: Lil not that girly* I'll keep that in mind.
see what did i tell ya... :notrust
:darn
Well I am a guy...:tem

:XD hey that could be a good one. better than lily of enternity anyway. i'll be glad to take that as my title. :kukuku
Mwhahahaha my brainwashing worked! :D. Okay I'll change it.
 

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lily of eternity... :amuse... that's too girl... :s im not that girly... :notrust
:oh

That is a typically girly answer though; they always deny their "girliness"......
its gantz... but it is good... the story anyway... but i bet the only thing the guys look at is the nudity there.... :darn
You don’t nee-chan?
okay impy-chan.... :oh really you like it... :oh
:thumbs
see what did i tell ya... :notrust
:smile-big
brainwash....? :oh eh?
It’s already starting to affect you....
:XD hey that could be a good one. better than lily of enternity anyway. i'll be glad to take that as my title. :kukuku
Lily of Death....not as good as the one I mentioned...:notrust
Mwhahahaha my brainwashing worked! :D. Okay I'll change it.
I thought "they" told you stop changing the first post...
 

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Hey zwiv! ^^
How is your brigade doing? Looks like your thread is always full of people and growing so fast. :XD
So a few question for you
1. What is your fav food?
2. What is the weirdest thing you ever ate before?
3. Where in the world would you most likely to go? and why?
4. What is your fav colour?
5. Who is your fav char in DGM?

okay impy-chan.... :oh really you like it... :oh
You called him impy~chan lil? :blink Well, not a bad idea lil. :p

:XD hey that could be a good one. better than lily of enternity anyway. i'll be glad to take that as my title. :kukuku
Cool! Lily of the death! :amuse You got a cool title lil! Congratz! :hug
 
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