vlado attempts to clean editing practice 02?

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Well no tipesetting on this one (sorry guys but i'm really lazy :P and buzy)


Imageshack is down??? OMFG!!!![br]Posted on: July 16, 2006, 04:51:38 PM_________________________________________________link 2
http://xs.to/xs.php?h=xs303&d=06280&f=1103gc.jpg
 

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No typesetting ??? Thats the most essential part of this practice ^^

Here's a checklist of things to do to the page:
* Slightly apply levels to the page.
* Rotate the page so it's nice and straight.
* Remove the text.
* Resize the image so its height is 1100 pixels.
* Typeset the page! (translation below)
 

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Editing practices are not for cleaning only ^^;
The page is already cleaned, all ya had to do was level.
 

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i rebordered it beacause i suck at rebordering....[br]Posted on: July 17, 2006, 08:00:00 AM_________________________________________________And i redrew all the broken lines...
 

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i'm not a tutor here, but anyways this is what i think of this :)

- new borders, nice and sharp, but round corners

- good leveling, but overdid the blacks a bit

- some drawings fell away for the new borders,

- whole border for right bottom panel is wrong, since it's supposed to be restricted by only the page at the bottom and right

- no complete redrawing of the rocks behind the sfx in the lower left panel, and the bush misses a bit of it too... for the left sfx there would be a need to continue the lines which give the rock its form, for the right one those lines and the border to show the watersurface misses.... also missing is the 'mirroring' (or whatever it is) of the rocks in the water.


thats it. ^^
 

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Hehe i was waiting for someone to notice :D you missed 2 mistakes :P
 

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- Erase the dusts completely. (2nd panel's big cloud to the left, 3rd panel 4th bubble, 6th panel 2nd bubble)
 

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you thought of the bubble not being complete as a result of overdrawing?
plus that the border on the first panel is too thick on the lower left?
and the dustspecks ocean referred too?


sry, i didn't look that close at first ^^;
 

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(Hrm, this is a good place to find a good QCer...? :P )
 

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ocean said:
(Hrm, this is a good place to find a good QCer...? :P )
if that was referring to me, definitely not... i still don't see many things i miss when i, myself, edit/clean/typeset pages >.< so i guess for qc at least I won't be good >.<
 

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No, just in general. It's a good thread to see who finds things the most (and practice finding mistakes and be hated by editors XD)
 

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ocean said:
(and practice finding mistakes and be hated by editors XD)
muhahahahaha, that's the only fun-part about qc-ing xD
 
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