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And everything comes down to the author intentionally not making sense, because you can't really unintentionally write a story that doesn't care about making sense or contradicting itself many times without the editor literally telling you about it and etc, Shinkai is just writing whatever he wants in the way he wants, and i totally disagree about the notion he doesn't know what he's doing because he knows very well (Not saying you said this), i also disagree a bit with the emotional parts because this chapter was very emotional in my opinion because in the case of the couple you do have all the weight of their story and etc, so this chapter i think was well done with a beautiful art, it's totally connected and parallels to the great chapter 1.The problem with Earthchild is that it not only doesn't follow real rules regarding space travel, it also doesn't follow it own rules. The story keep set up rules and then discarded them the next chapter. Superheroes stories do have internal rules that they follow until it got retcon for a reboot but Earthchild just keep rebooting every chapter.
The other problem is that the series just really bad at doing emotional moments. It doesn't let the emotion flow naturally, there no build up, it just the author tell the readers how they should feel in this particular moment. This is especially bad because the type of manga Earthchild is require good emotional aspect.
Even the child care aspect isn't good because how the MC and the story treat the baby as nothing more than a plot device and a telephone.
And finally, the MC is probably the most unintentionally irreprehensible protags I have ever seen. The story and the characters keep showering him with praise about how great he is despite just been a normal guy. But when you stop and think about it, the MC is extremely selfish to the point of harming other for his own benefit. Like the fact that he ready to take his son to space, putting him in front of a meteor shower just so he can save his wife is something that most parents would against. This actually the same problem with Shinkai writing in Soul Catcher too, MC got praise to high heaven while done very little.
Like i said, i understand well the problems with the overall series, the point of my comment is about taking this series waaay too seriously in the end