KabuOro 356 p16 (updated)

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Well, that's it for now, pleas comment for my future colorings.
I can't get heir right, but the rest is almost as i want it )




feel free to write all bad stuff, I'm just learning :amuse
 
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Re: KabuOro 356 p16

As long as its okay to write bad stuff...:amuse I like the clothing, I think it was done pretty well, I would have chosen a different color for the skin though, a more pinker natural look. Also the hair needs some more defined highlights and shading. Other than that it looks good. Dont forget that background though - try not to leave it blank, at least give it a fill color. Hope this helps/guides you. Keep at it! :)
 

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Re: KabuOro 356 p16

thanks, i'm doing it right now ^_^ upgrade is coming
 

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Nice. A bit greenish thought did you change the hue at the end? And shouldn't his hair be like gray and his shirt like black?
 

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all bad stuff <3

Keep it up
 

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Nice. A bit greenish thought did you change the hue at the end? And shouldn't his hair be like gray and his shirt like black?
no... i just thought because the episode is in the forest, so i'll make green background. Hair and shirt - I forgot how they really look, so I just colored it how I saw :amuse
all bad stuff <3

Keep it up
thanks :amuse
 
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