Naruto NG (Next Generation)

[Predator]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02



Good one, DD!

Did you wait on purpose the moment when Fuzz, Jabbs and Khal are offline? Or did yesterdays convo force you in giving them the chapter then already?

 

[Dynamic Dragon]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

lol, thanks guys XD

pred: haha not really, just a funny coincidence lmao XD

 

[mageofdeath]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

great chapter thanks DD!!!!

 

[vlado]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

greate coincidence muhahahha!!!!!!

 

[Dynamic Dragon]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

lol thanks guys XD
haha ^^

 

[rykarreolacr]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

DD, I re-read the chapter to appreciate the details even more.
I fell in love with that cover...
Are you planning to start an original manga sometime in the future?
I'm sure you're gonna have success!!!

Btw, chapter 3 of Raruto has been ready for like a week, I'm just mean, and I won't release it till Monday
Mwahaha!!!

 

[Galth]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

Did you wait on purpose the moment when Fuzz, Jabbs and Khal are offline? Or did yesterdays convo force you in giving them the chapter then already?

i was offline because of the dutch soccer match ( 2-1 :knk ), but anyway, indeed there have been some rumours of me seeing the chapter 45 minutes earlier...

>.>

 

[vlado]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

LOL , daaaamn you you freaking bastard , khal Waaaahhh DIEEEEE!!!!!!!

 

[strider123]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

http://rapidshare.de/files/23256869/Naruto_NG_Chapter_02_-_romanian_translation.rar.html translated into romanian

 

[Dynamic Dragon]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

strider, if u need an undtranslate version ask khal, he has a copy of the raw ^^[br]Posted on: June 16, 2006, 02:05:33 PM_________________________________________________

DD, I re-read the chapter to appreciate the details even more.
I fell in love with that cover...
Are you planning to start an original manga sometime in the future?
I'm sure you're gonna have success!!!

Btw, chapter 3 of Raruto has been ready for like a week, I'm just mean, and I won't release it till Monday
Mwahaha!!!

lol thanks ^^ glad some1 actually looks at the detail ^^
hehe... monday... ill b looking forward to it XD

 

[strider123]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

neah, i can manage, tx anyway

 

[Dynamic Dragon]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

^^' u sure??
ok ^^, ill b releasing the raw too so people can typeset it in diff language next time ^^

 

[Dynamic Dragon]

lol, but i dont need help on those, what i need is another artist that is equal to me XD
typesetting is easy stuff and its a routine when i clean the page X_D

 

[Galth]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

the raw

HAHAHAHA XD
Awesome choice of words

Be sure to release that a day in advance from now on XD

 

[destinator]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

HAHAHAHA XD
Awesome choice of words

Be sure to release that a day in advance from now on XD

cant wait for the japanese version LOL =)

 

[kulong]

Re: NG Chapter 3 Contributions

ahh dun temp us that much ^-^ plus i want to see how well u guys drew 3rd hokage or 4th =P

 

[yopakfu]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

I really like it DD!

I hope you appreciate some critic, cause it's the simplest way to improve:

- The character shots are mostly done very well, though sometimes the down-right&left angle(s) (dunno how else to describe it) is somehow a bit odd. I think you can work on that and it'll be perfect.

- Then there are some slight proportion mistakes, but that's not really disturbing.

- Page 06: the upper frame with sachi, the shadow on his neck. I first thought it was something wrapped around his neck. It's not really a big prob, but I just noticed it...

- Last page: lower-frame with hokage and sakura (sorry forgot her name), the angle of this one and the stand of the hokage could both be done better. It's almost like he's falling down on sakura (uuuuuh~, maybe he'll say lets have *** sakura-chan!!! XD).

Please don't hate me, i'm just giving some advice cause I'm an artist myself and I know critics are good.
I'm looking forward to your next chap, DD!

 

[Dynamic Dragon]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

lol thanks peeps

@khal: lol well w/e u call it XDDDD

@des: haha yeah! jap version! XD

@yop: lol dont worry i myself notice it too ^^.... after all im not the 'real thing' XD

 

[Tamerlane]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

Wooo I just read Chapter 2....I know a bit late....^__^;;

I think that my favorite character so far Sachi....though he looks as if he is hiding something important. o_o

I also like the little additions that you added with all the colored pages. The one with Sachi looking down over Konhoa is good.

=D

 

[abdulahi]

Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

this was great but what a cliff hanger. hurry up with the next chapter thank you for brining this to us DD.