Discussion Re-write the Alvarez Arc

[Shasha23]

I would make it so that Zeref never had the 12 nor was he a king but rather he came to attack FT solo like a boss and after fighting everyone he lost most of his stamina and could not use the power of FH making him so weak that he lost to Natsu in the end.

Wow Hiro should have asked me to help him long ago so this story didn't become so bad that it's making Bleach ending look 1mil times better

Even that garbage called Naruto had a better ending

 

[kkck]

So..... just to be clear, because I can't believe it yet, mashima dealt with acknologia via throwing him in an actual and literal plot hole right?

 

[OharaLibrarian]

@OharaLibrarian
I absolutely love the fact that Brandish was able to defeat Dimaria, while also keeping the Dimaria one shot on Brandish. Showing how they are just about equal, and that their hax are so deadly and instanteneous that the victor is decided based on who pulls the trigger first..

I love the way you put it, it's exactly what I was going for, but you worded it magnificently!
And don't worry too much, you aren't obligated to always reply! Any feedback is appreciated, but don't burden yourself with it!

--- Double Post Merged, May 21, 2017, Original Post Date: May 21, 2017 ---

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 9

• Chapter 9: The Beginning of the End
  
• Chapter 9 Afterword

@Takuan, @Globear
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

 

[King of kings]

I love the way you put it, it's exactly what I was going for, but you worded it magnificently!
And don't worry too much, you aren't obligated to always reply! Any feedback is appreciated, but don't burden yourself with it!

--- Double Post Merged, May 21, 2017, Original Post Date: May 21, 2017 ---

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 9

• Chapter 9: The Beginning of the End
  
• Chapter 9 Afterword

@Takuan, @Globear
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

Damn it's was awesome chapter, it's like Fairy Tail at begging of series with not fake death , no Nakama and strategy.I hope you gonna put Acnologia more panel.

 

[OharaLibrarian]

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 10

Sorry for the slight delay, ended up feeling very sick. New chapter later today!

• Chapter 10: "She is waiting"
  
• Chapter 10 Afterword

@Takuan, @Globear
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

--- Double Post Merged, May 24, 2017, Original Post Date: May 24, 2017 ---

Damn it's was awesome chapter, it's like Fairy Tail at begging of series with not fake death , no Nakama and strategy.I hope you gonna put Acnologia more panel.

Thanks! And don't worry, Acnologia will have his fully-fledged multiple-chapter Seven Dragon Slayers vs Acno battle!

 

[Pirate Queen]

I would have liked Historia-Hades to have pulled a Madara and seperate from the life-link magic that bound him to Neinhart (while simultaneously stealing 99% of Neinharts magic pool) so that Hades could have one last time to shine as i feel his character was underutilized. Also, i think Hades vs August would have been the sickest fight in the manga

 

[OharaLibrarian]

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 11

• Chapter 11: Guild
  
• Chapter 11 Afterword

@Takuan, @Globear
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

 

[Pirate Queen]

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 11

• Chapter 11: Guild
  
• Chapter 11 Afterword

@Takuan, @Globear
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

That was fucking savage! That was amazing i cant put that one into words

 

[OharaLibrarian]

Rewrite today will be on break, had some issues with scheduling and posting somewhere else, I apologize. I'll use this time to further work on it, next chapter will be another two days from now. Sorry for the wait!

 

[Ilikeyou]

I will change some stuff my from original opinion.

 

[OharaLibrarian]

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 12
Not sure why, but this message didn't go through the other day, sorry about that. Enjoy the double chapter I guess!

• Chapter 12: Battle of the Devils
  
• Chapter 12 Afterword

@Takuan, @Globear
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

--- Double Post Merged, May 31, 2017, Original Post Date: May 31, 2017 ---

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 13

• Chapter 13: Family
  
• Chapter 13 Afterword

@Takuan, @Globear
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

 

[Ebony Maw]

@OharaLibrarian Damn!

That was amazing! The off-paneling of CS was handled much better, and I'm really looking forward to seeing the future of Jellal vs August, especially since it seems teamwork is finally going to be a large factor. I also liked the change about Natsu/E.N.D, having E.N.D as more of a parasite was a nice touch, not to mention it keeps a good fight without making Gray act OOC. I'm hyped AF for future chapters man, thanks for doing this, the editing is awesome and the changes are really bringing out the potential the Alvarez arc had.

 

[OharaLibrarian]

@OharaLibrarian Damn!

That was amazing! The off-paneling of CS was handled much better, and I'm really looking forward to seeing the future of Jellal vs August, especially since it seems teamwork is finally going to be a large factor. I also liked the change about Natsu/E.N.D, having E.N.D as more of a parasite was a nice touch, not to mention it keeps a good fight without making Gray act OOC. I'm hyped AF for future chapters man, thanks for doing this, the editing is awesome and the changes are really bringing out the potential the Alvarez arc had.

Thanks, I appreciate that a lot!
But oh man, I really mean it that we're just getting started. I enjoy this part of the rewrite, but I think the point where it gets really good is from Irene's fight onwards, especially at the equivalent of chapter 519. Ironically enough, the point where the writing dropped in the original is when it takes off here I'd say, so I hope you look forward to that

--- Double Post Merged, Jun 2, 2017, Original Post Date: Jun 2, 2017 ---

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 14
The Larcade fight, a fan favorite. Enjoy!

• Chapter 14: Lust
• Chapter 14 Afterword

@Takuan, @Globear
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

--- Double Post Merged, Jun 4, 2017 ---

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 15

• Chapter 15: Gluttony
• Chapter 15 Afterword

@Takuan, @Globear
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

 

[Invel > Zeref]

My Alvarez arc rewrite:

Zeref: August, I want you to copy Dimaria's time stop and use it to kill Fairy Tail and obtain Fairy Heart all within one chapter
August: Okay

The End

 

[LaGOAT]

My Alvarez arc rewrite:

Zeref: August, I want you to copy Dimaria's time stop and use it to kill Fairy Tail and obtain Fairy Heart all within one chapter
August: Okay

The End

nakama base POF natsu INCOMING!! (proceeds to oneshot august)
august :GHHAAHAA!!! HOW ???
Natsu: PLOT!!!

hiro:

 

[OharaLibrarian]

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 16

• Chapter 16: Somnolence
• Chapter 16 Afterword

@Takuan, @Globear
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

--- Double Post Merged, Jun 8, 2017, Original Post Date: Jun 6, 2017 ---

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 17
This begins the Irene fight, possibly one of my favorites in this rewrite, or even this whole arc! Enjoy!

• Chapter 17: I am you and you are me
  
• Chapter 17 Afterword

@Takuan, @Globear
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!
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--- Double Post Merged, Jun 13, 2017 ---

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 18
I'm very sorry about the delay, I got stuck with some issues handling the rewrite, but they have been solved for the moment being. Schedule will resume as always, see you in two days!

• Chapter 18: The Dragon King's Festival
  
• Chapter 18 Afterword

@Takuan, @Globear
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

--- Double Post Merged, Jun 16, 2017 ---

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 19

• Chapter 19: Wendy Belserion
  
• Chapter 19 Afterword

@Takuan, @Globear
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

--- Double Post Merged, Jun 19, 2017 ---

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 20
In the original, this chapter was infamous for being the point where the writing went downhill, but in the rewrite I feel it's when things finally start picking up! I love the following battles, so I hope you enjoy them too!
Also, chapter releases might be spaced out a little more on some occasions since I'm busy studying, sorry about that!

• Chapter 20: Erza
  
• Chapter 20 Afterword

@Takuan, @Globear
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

 

[Takuan]

That is fucking epic. Way, wayyy better than the original.

 

[OharaLibrarian]

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 21
hm, my computer crashed after I uploaded this yesterday, so it apparently didn't register as posted, sorry about that!

• Chapter 21: The center of Natsu's heart
  
• Chapter 21 Afterword

@Takuan
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!

 

[King of kings]

This is a masterpiece, keep going well

 

[OharaLibrarian]

The Alvarez Rewrite - Chapter 22
And so begins the August fight!

• Chapter 22: The King of Magic
  
• Chapter 22 Afterword

@Takuan
You can check all the available chapters of the rewrite at https://oharalibrarian.imgur.com/ ! Thanks for reading!
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