Shounen Time Paradox Ghostwriter by Kenji Ichima & Tsunehiro Date

[Stivie]

Not sure what you've been smoking lately man but I want some

I said the truth.

 

[Wookitake]

Daaaaamn. If this was truly the core of the series, it should have been made clear beforehand.

 

[Stivie]

Ch. 07

MANGA Plus by SHUEISHA

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[SharkBait]

A bit of wonky writing here and now and I think this has been one of the best starts [7 chapters] to a manga in years. Hopefully it survives to play out the plot.

Am concerned about where it goes, will Teppei not get any more of the manga? Does he have to write how it goes himself now, or will his change be immediately rewarded with it continuing? I cant imagine you would ditch the time machine now.

 

[Wookitake]

I was going to ask you about this as well. What happens next.

I have a feeling that new chapters of WK will be sent from the future as Teppei keeps making advances in regards to rewriting history.

Actually, the moment I wrote this last sentence, I figured out a way to describe the plot: Teppei is copying WK's story in order to rewrite Aino's history!
His masterpiece won't be WK but saving Aino's life. Really nice.

 

[SharkBait]

I have a feeling that new chapters of WK will be sent from the future as Teppei keeps making advances in regards to rewriting history.

Oh i guess that could work, wonder what the explanation would be considering the letter in jump though, would hhe get her drafts?

Also on one hand I wonder what his future self is like, did he even succeed himself.

I wish he did get to do his own manga on the side or something, cant just do white knight.

 

[TyVip]

Collab time with Aino? Aino has note of the original WK

So the future dude knows Teppei only has 11 (12-1) issues left, and may or may not do something about it.

 

[pamuchi]

Here, some spoilers pic:

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

[Wookitake]

OK, it seems the sci-fi element will become important once more.

 

[SharkBait]

Wow this is incredibly interesting now that Teppei has to complete the story and also I guess compete against some new series. Cheering him on.

Also this whole experience is definitely going to level everything up for him, but I think it now kind of makes it where he isn't doing manga for fun and happiness anymore, but out of desperation.

 

[Stivie]

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[Wookitake]

So now it will be Bakuman + Time Traveling Information?

 

[Stivie]

So now it will be Bakuman + Time Traveling Information?

I think he has distanced himself a lot from Bakuman.

I'm very curious about that number sequence, it had a number 7 and a number 12.
In chapter 7 there was the plot twist of the story.
Seriously that in chapter 12 there will be another plot twist ?

 

[SharkBait]

I think he has distanced himself a lot from Bakuman.

I'm very curious about that number sequence, it had a number 7 and a number 12.
In chapter 7 there was the plot twist of the story.
Seriously that in chapter 12 there will be another plot twist ?

Do you mean in White Knight or in TPGW?

 

[Stivie]

Do you mean in White Knight or in TPGW?

TPGW

I'm talking about the numbers that appear in the chapter.

7, 12, 20, 31, 37, 41

And the number 7 was highlighted.

 

[SharkBait]

TPGW

I'm talking about the numbers that appear in the chapter.

7, 12, 20, 31, 37, 41

And the number 7 was highlighted.

i thought it would correspond to developments happening in White Knight.

 

[Wookitake]

I think he has distanced himself a lot from Bakuman.

I'm very curious about that number sequence, it had a number 7 and a number 12.
In chapter 7 there was the plot twist of the story.
Seriously that in chapter 12 there will be another plot twist ?

I thought it was completely different in the other chapters, but now the need to beat her makes me think a similar dynamic will occur (in regards to talks with editors, the changes in story in WK, etc)

In regards to the sequence, I didn't think of it. The √144 I thought it was just a comment on their next chapter being 12 indeed.

 

[SharkBait]

Why another time skip, and half a year? We skip over how Teppei handled chapter 46???

That guilt and voice in his head is hard. I kind of wish the mentor discussion resulted in him going to talk to his mentor. Teppei really needs someone to talk too.

Feeling like the manga needed a bit better refined writing, we've sped through so much time, like were only on chp 9 and White Knight is in the 40's? Itsuka already got Anima as a manga, etc...There were opportunities for drama here.

 

[Stivie]

Why another time skip, and half a year? We skip over how Teppei handled chapter 46???

That guilt and voice in his head is hard. I kind of wish the mentor discussion resulted in him going to talk to his mentor. Teppei really needs someone to talk too.

Feeling like the manga needed a bit better refined writing, we've sped through so much time, like were only on chp 9 and White Knight is in the 40's? Itsuka already got Anima as a manga, etc...There were opportunities for drama here.

several jump manga have such accelerated starts.
But if this is due to cancellation, I blame it more that he was criticizing for bullshit than the author who was trying to create his story.

 

[Halloween]

This was dumb. This was *extremely* dumb.

Why waste nearly the whole chapter on how Teppei will manage doing White Knight on his own, without reference material, to then suddenly skip ahead six months?!

I wanted to *see* how he did it.

Ugh.