First translation... need help
*edit: I should mention that someone has looked at my translation and sent me a message.
Hey, I just posted my first translation:
http://mangahelpers.com/t/kakoshima/releases/12021
I could use a bit of help though. I'm not sure of the meaning in some spots:
1 :
"委員長おはようがざいます！！
Good morning Ms. President (note: Konoha is most probably the president or chairman of the student association)"
2:
box: 今はまだ強化魔術しか使えない私はマスターのおそばでサポートをすることくらいしか出来ませんが．．．
Right now, I can only use hardening magic. So, I can only support him. (note: would "act in a supporting role" be better?)
3:
not sure of this whole part. Are they really talking about pillars? I guess it could be: "counter for nobles". So that would mean that there are 72 demons lords?
アスタロト
ソロモン王が封じたとされるソロモンの７２柱の魔神の１柱。４００の悪霊の軍団を率い、序裂２９位の大公爵とされる。別の書物では、ルシファー、ベルゼバブと並ぶ３柱として名をあげられている高位の悪魔。
box: He's one of the demons that were sealed in 72 pillars by King Solomon. He commands an army of 400 imps. He is ranked as a 29th level Great Duke. In another book (of the bible probably) he's mentioned along with Lucifer and Belzebub as a high ranking demon.
4:
not quite sure here either
弟子を守るために騎士が残るのならともかく．．． // そこで逃げれば騎士じゃないよね
Knights will always stay to protect students, so...
if I didn't stay I wouldn't be a knight
5:
what's up with the mask thing?
余からアスタロトという殻を奪った人間がかような腑抜けでは．．．
まあよい余を連れていけ悪魔の殻を失った身では魔界には戻れぬ
So the human who stole Astaroth from me is that kind of idiot...
Well, whatever. Take me along with you now. Since I lost my demon shell, I can't go back to the Etherworld anymore with this body. (unsure)
余波金星の女神イショタル
I'm Isthar, goddess of Venus.
アスタロトとは信仰心を失った余が憎しみを糧に身にまとった仮面じゃ
Astaroth was a mask put around me. He fed me, who had lost my faith, with hate (or: he was a mask that fed from my hate. I had lost my faith.)
じゃがその仮面もすでに奪われてしもうた．．．
but then you snatched away the mask (note: unsure of translation)
Thanks for looking!
