Im pretty happy with Noah’s Notes first chapter. Some good characterisation between the duo, decent world building and pacing, and it set the scene for what’s to come. Generally all things that most cancel fodder lack. First chapter wasn’t too slow or fast either, it was what a first chapter should be. It feels like the kind of thing that will be a success to me, or at least make it past a few cancellation rounds. Possibly the first chapter ive enjoyed the most since Dr Stone, and maybe even Neverland. Don’t want to get too gung-ho, but I liked it. The characters themselves are my only real issue. Whether the whole Gal sidekick thing ends up being good or not remains to be seen, and I hope the Archaeologist isn’t as one-sided as he came across in this chapter. It worked for now, but may not long-term.
Jujutsu on the other hand had a better 2nd chapter, but the pacing is still screwed. This should have been in chapter one. The world and characters still feel lifeless. And the whole “one person in ten thousand” just screams “my concept isnt interesting enough on its own”.