Done Witch Hunter ch 32 + 33

[g1alpha]

Well I've finished translating the first 2 chapters of Vol 8 of Witch Hunter. It would be helpful if someone would come and proofread it and revise it.

http://mangahelpers.com/t/g1alpha/releases/14970

http://mangahelpers.com/t/g1alpha/releases/15008

RAWS: http://mangahelpers.com/downloads/read-online/43112/1

 

[haewoon]

Hi, I think you missed one's lines.

05
Sabrina: (What is that?) / There’s a huge amount of mana gathering in that magic gun.
Tasha: It’s useless.

05
Sabrina: (What is that?) / There’s a huge amount of mana gathering in that magic gun. / (missing) 만일의 사태에 대비해 비탈을 좀 더 산개시켜야...
Tasha: It’s useless.

만일의 사태에 대비해 비탈을 좀 더 산개시켜야...
Preparing for the worst, I'd spread out Veetar...

 

[g1alpha]

Oh I see, thanks. But wouldn't it be Preparing for the worst I have to spread out Veetar...? because 산개시켜야....=산개시켜야되?

 

[haewoon]

hmm...(I talked about this sentence with my friends a few minutes ago.)

In this situation, '...' can be translated into two sentences.

1. "만일의 사태에 대비해 비탈을 좀 더 산개시켜야 돼"
The verb of this sentence has the same meaning of 'have to' in the "I have to study hard".

2. "만일의 사태에 대비해 비탈을 좀 더 산개시켜야겠다"
The verb of this sentence has the same meaning of 'would' in the "I said I would try it".

Both two sentences can be right, but there is a nuance.

 

[g1alpha]

I see.... well anyway I used the first one. thanks for the tip

 

[hanayuri]

05
Halloween: (Damn it, that Tasha bastard… He cut my mana supply!) / (My body is like soaked cotton… I can’t even lift my arm.) / (Are you saying that you don’t need my help…?) / Idiot Master.

my body feels like soaked cotton.

06
Tasha: You dodging well here and there~ but did you know? / This is a battlefield. It’s my space. / It’s impossible for me to miss here.

You're

14
Halloween: Move!!
Halloween 2: Who are you to order me?
Ryuhwan: That’s enough, Tasha’s supporter. / If you don’t behave nicely, this time I won’t use a tranquilizer bullet and shoot a real one instead. / You too.
Halloween: Tranquilizer bullet?!
Ryuhwan: Right now I only have one request.

I won't use a tranquilizer bullet but shoot a real one instead.

19
Halloween 2: It’s not like I said something wrong… / Ryuhwan became like that once in the past. At that time, Ryuhwan’s master so it was solved easily. / But she’s not here right now. No matter how much the healing witch heals the ruined body, how long do you think the human mind will last against the pain?
Neptis: Don’t Worry.

"At that time, Ryuhwan’s master so it was solved easily"
this doesn't sound right.

 

[g1alpha]

thanks.... I got a B in English LOL T_T well anyways i updated it