Zoro

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Hello :)
Not bad for a first try. Don't worry, my first try was worse :sweat

There are rooms of improvements of course. For example, perhaps a little bit of shadows on his face would bring the more realistic feeling. Since from the lineart, the light source is coming from Zoro's right, it's weird not to have a little bit of shadows at all on his face.

Secondly, it's kinda blurry (the lines). Try not to enlarge the image too much, it'll destroy the lines. You can either resize it to a suitable size (not really recommended) or get a bigger resolution scan :)

Just keep it up, and you'll improve for sure :thumbs

Btw, you can upload your works into our Art Gallery. For instructions on how, see HERE.
 

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yeah another new artist =D We need you here ;)

If got only one thing to add, use darker shadow colors and lighter highlights. ;)

waiting for your second picture.
Maybe you can use these as a somehow clean base:

Clickable!^^
 
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omni-giri

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^^ thx~
ok! yosh! my 2ed time! gooo!!! *looks a pics you have* heh zoro, duh! *click, save, start*


YOSH! THANKS PPL!!





MY SECOND ONE! yay
 
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whoa.. You improved a lot between you first and second try.. Good job there!
McFranky, mind pming me some coloring toturials/guides, since I'm really getting interested in this? xD
 

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Not bad. Keep it up. :D
 
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