Dragon Fall

[leecherboy]

Re: Dragon Fall #0 Raw & Translation

It's true, it looks so cool like that! So fast!

Edit: in page 42, the word 'time' was missing. Yep, I'm such a nit-picky one

 

[vlado]

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I'm romanian so my english grammer may not be perfect but isn't this
I've only got left the fucking monkey!]
suposed to be
I only have left this fucking monkey!]

 

[Kilik]

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actually wouldn't that make more sense as "I only have this fucking monkey left!"?

 

[vlado]

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yeah , it sound better and makes sense...

 

[Daioten]

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or even: "This is all the fucking money I've got left!"

 

[destinator]

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Well I can change it anytime...psd files 2 win. Well it takes a lot of time. I guess I wont finish it before monday...I almost did the first 10 pages and its a bit time-consuming...but lets see whats possible

 

[vlado]

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K , can't wait to read it , i read the translation with the raw next to it *damn me* , but i'm steal eager to see it , maybe we'll do other chapters to?*this is a special chapter not included in the storyline*

 

[destinator]

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I guess we can do more of it. Its incredible funny and entertaining.

 

[rykarreolacr]

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I guess we can do more of it. Its incredible funny and entertaining.

Wait till you see first chapter XD Funny as hell

*this is a special chapter not included in the storyline*

It is a special chapter, but you can include it in the story line later on, as a matter of fact, if you don't include it, the story won't make any sense.
The right way to read Dragon Fall is this one:

- From "Dragon Fall 01" to "Dragon Fall 30"
- "Dragon Fall Special 0"
- "Dragon Fall Special 00"
- From "Dragon Fall 31" to "Dragon Fall 38"
- "Super Dragon Fall Turbo 1"
- From "Dragon Fall Turbo 39" to "Dragon Fall Turbo 47"
- "Dragon Fall GTI Summer Special"
- "Dragon Fall GTI Special 2"

It's really confusing, I know...

 

[leecherboy]

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Alright, reread the raw yesterday and spotted some tiny remarks I had overseen, so I added them in pages 7,10,15 and 51. Also, did some fine tuning in Trakatranks' speech in page 14, and Gohan's speech in page 32. Everything else is ultimately fine (though, if the order of the words sounds weird in English, you may rearrange them)...
And that order rykarreolacr said is almost fine, but he doesn't want to believe me when I say #0 came out first and is in fact the first one...
But I'll probably end it in chapter 30, because it ends a cycle and because thinking of translating #00 gives me the creeps... and isn't worth it.

 

[rykarreolacr]

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I know chapter 0 came first... but it fits perfectly after chapter 30...

I think you should translate till chapter 24, after that, it's just... weird. Like a mixture of Evangelion, Back to the Future, random horror movies, and some more crazy shit.
I think the authors started smoking to much pot...

 

[destinator]

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Oh cool I got almost 20 pages finished now...gonna look into the changes you made later.

 

[rykarreolacr]

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Way to go des! Looking forward to the release

 

[vlado]

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Gg , oy ryka can you post the raws here?
So i can start cleaning...?

 

[destinator]

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Hrhr well I'll finish it soon, probably 2-3h till I can upload it Stay tuned.

Btw vlado, a somfg thank you too you because the cleaning would have taken forever for me...!

 

[vlado]

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OOo , greate how many pages left?

 

[destinator]

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11 left and proofreading/wachting

But I am doing a little a Wc break at the moment

 

[vlado]

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lol , a wc break =)) , well when you finish it send me a pm with it and i'l prof it and edit what's necesary , altrough that my english isn't perfect so send it to khal to

 

[destinator]

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If leecherboy is around at page 49 there is something standing right from the tv and there is no translation

 

[leecherboy]

Re: Dragon Fall #0 Raw & Translation

(Haa, I can't login on weekends... )
You mean "¡Horreur!"? That's french for "The horror!"... Honestly, I assumed I didn't have to translate that...