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Apparently, you were right. It is possible to use multiple types for your ability. I was just looking at Kastro's abilities, and he was able to materialize his "double" and manipulate it while being enhancer. But according to Hisoka, that was the reason that he lost. He ignored his type.
So that raises a question. What type are you (or the user of those abilities) going to be?
We might be able to come to a better conclusion after understanding the main hatsu type.
I had the same confusion with my ability as well. I am not sure what manipulators can, and cannot control (like space and minds and whatnot).
Since now I believe that you can materialize creatures (like the double), I would say that your demon could be from materialization. It would probably also use some manipulation to control it.
The one thing that I think needs looking at is that your demon consumes your target's nen. It is like the target is fighting himself/herself, he/she and the target are both using the same nen. I don't see any chance of winning.
Maybe you need one more condition in order to activate the demon (other than the hand on forehead), or 'nerf' the ability a bit.
So that raises a question. What type are you (or the user of those abilities) going to be?
We might be able to come to a better conclusion after understanding the main hatsu type.
Emission or materialization is probably correct for activating the space, but since you are going to be controlling what is inside it, I think that would be manipulation as well. From what I understand, transmutation is to change the characteristics of your nen to those of something else. I don't think that applies here (I could be mistaken).As for the first ability, i figured it was emission because the Nen space is emitted from a certain point and affects a certain area and it is transformation because it is the space within the Nen space that is affected. My understanding is that manipulation only affects physical things like people and objects, rather than Nen. Although in my opinion, the Nen space could also be conjuration (like Novu's ability).
I had the same confusion with my ability as well. I am not sure what manipulators can, and cannot control (like space and minds and whatnot).
That does make sense actually. If the second ability doesn't do anything but takes his "soul", which doesn't really affect the target, then it could be the condition for your third ability (which could be your main one).It's just flavor. I call it soul but it could be anything else - basically it's the stuff that's used as the "building blocks" for the demons. It could be anything to be honest, like blood, but i figured it would be too easy. Here, to obtain the target's soul, the user must put his hand over the target's head. Since the user is not a combat class this is supposedly a fairly difficult condition to clear and only made possible because the 1st ability allows him to manipulate space to safely close the distance (or extend it to avoid attacks/counter attacks).
The condition is the successful execution of the 2nd ability. I might also add further conditions though. For one thing, the 1st ability should immediately deactivate. I also consciously decided that it was manipulation because the 3rd ability is the creation of a real creature, not a Nen based one (think of it as a chemical process augmented by Nen). The reason why i wanted the creatures to be real is because it fits with the whole Necromancer theme. Also it's more horrifying.
Since now I believe that you can materialize creatures (like the double), I would say that your demon could be from materialization. It would probably also use some manipulation to control it.
The one thing that I think needs looking at is that your demon consumes your target's nen. It is like the target is fighting himself/herself, he/she and the target are both using the same nen. I don't see any chance of winning.
Maybe you need one more condition in order to activate the demon (other than the hand on forehead), or 'nerf' the ability a bit.
Glad I could be of help! I actually like your theme of death and necromancy. Keep it up!Thanks for the feedback! You're right - the 1st ability shouldn't run concurrently with the 2nd and 3rd. I might also have to rework the conditions for the 3rd ability to make it less dependent on the 2nd. Well, more thinking to do, both in terms of the flavor and logic of the abilities.




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i can transmute my aura into water .. im still thinking of good abilities hehe