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Apparently, you were right. It is possible to use multiple types for your ability. I was just looking at Kastro's abilities, and he was able to materialize his "double" and manipulate it while being enhancer. But according to Hisoka, that was the reason that he lost. He ignored his type.
So that raises a question. What type are you (or the user of those abilities) going to be?
We might be able to come to a better conclusion after understanding the main hatsu type.

As for the first ability, i figured it was emission because the Nen space is emitted from a certain point and affects a certain area and it is transformation because it is the space within the Nen space that is affected. My understanding is that manipulation only affects physical things like people and objects, rather than Nen. Although in my opinion, the Nen space could also be conjuration (like Novu's ability).
Emission or materialization is probably correct for activating the space, but since you are going to be controlling what is inside it, I think that would be manipulation as well. From what I understand, transmutation is to change the characteristics of your nen to those of something else. I don't think that applies here (I could be mistaken).
I had the same confusion with my ability as well. I am not sure what manipulators can, and cannot control (like space and minds and whatnot).

It's just flavor. I call it soul but it could be anything else - basically it's the stuff that's used as the "building blocks" for the demons. It could be anything to be honest, like blood, but i figured it would be too easy. Here, to obtain the target's soul, the user must put his hand over the target's head. Since the user is not a combat class this is supposedly a fairly difficult condition to clear and only made possible because the 1st ability allows him to manipulate space to safely close the distance (or extend it to avoid attacks/counter attacks).

The condition is the successful execution of the 2nd ability. I might also add further conditions though. For one thing, the 1st ability should immediately deactivate. I also consciously decided that it was manipulation because the 3rd ability is the creation of a real creature, not a Nen based one (think of it as a chemical process augmented by Nen). The reason why i wanted the creatures to be real is because it fits with the whole Necromancer theme. Also it's more horrifying.
That does make sense actually. If the second ability doesn't do anything but takes his "soul", which doesn't really affect the target, then it could be the condition for your third ability (which could be your main one).
Since now I believe that you can materialize creatures (like the double), I would say that your demon could be from materialization. It would probably also use some manipulation to control it.
The one thing that I think needs looking at is that your demon consumes your target's nen. It is like the target is fighting himself/herself, he/she and the target are both using the same nen. I don't see any chance of winning.
Maybe you need one more condition in order to activate the demon (other than the hand on forehead), or 'nerf' the ability a bit.

Thanks for the feedback! You're right - the 1st ability shouldn't run concurrently with the 2nd and 3rd. I might also have to rework the conditions for the 3rd ability to make it less dependent on the 2nd. Well, more thinking to do, both in terms of the flavor and logic of the abilities.
Glad I could be of help! I actually like your theme of death and necromancy. Keep it up!
 

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hatsu: emission
name: super fist bombs
details: so its basically you start the move and aura starts collecting in your fist, and the longer you wait, the bigger it gets, and when you punch or swing your arm, the ball goes flying in that direction, once it is released from your hand, the aura starts charging from size 0 again.
-the rate of charging is a set rate (radius of bomb increases 1inch every second or something...)
-if the bomb exceeds a certain size, it blows up on your fist, obviously hurting you (max size can be increased with lots of training)
so if you punched very fast repeatedly, your be shooting many small bombs, or you can charge up for a big one, but if you forget to turn the skill off or try and charge too long, you blow up
both hands operate independently of each other, so you can fire with one hand very fast, while charging the other up for a big bomb
 

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That is pretty interesting. I am surprised no one came up with something like that before. Kinda reminds me of DBZ :D
Does the bomb itself has anything to it? Like when it hit, does it explode or just does a blunt impact?
I think it could be improved by adding additional effects with some conditions maybe. Pretty cool nonetheless.
 

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Im thinking it might be just blunt damage like the volleyball dude's ball, cuz to explode, you would need the transmute the emitted aura into an explosive, and emmiters arent that good with transmution
but maybe if the exploding on yourself condition is powerful enough (so much so, that a big explosion could damage you very badly) then it would explode for every shot (but explosion strength would be proportional to size of bomb)

also:
hatsu: reinforcement
name: brutal honesty
details: If you announce an attack before doing it, the attack will get a significant speed and power boost
like: "Im goin to punch you in the face"
and then you punch the guy in the face and its reinforced
the more details you give, the more powerful your reinforcement is:
"im goin to turning kick you on the right side of your torso" > "im goin to kick you in the body"

and a fun ability:
hatsu: tansformation
name: yum!!!!
dets: You can transform your aura into a "taste"
-can only transform into things you have tasted before
-the aura would have both taste and texture and it would feel like your eating the actual food mmmmmmmmmm
this would be for a gourmet hunter say they find and eat the perfect dish, they can then share it with people, and eat it whenever they want
 
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Yay reinforcement ability! I haven't seen many of those.
Balanced, simple, and interesting. You really got a nice mind.
Does it have any consequence? For example, if you do not do what you said you are going to (or didn't attempt at all), is anything going to happen?
I can see some abuse if nothing happens ;)

haha, "yum".
Once again, you have some wonderful ideas. Menchi is going to be proud about this one.
 

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I really enjoyed your Brutal Honesty. Deeeeeeeeeeeply interesting.

It would be fun to fight against you. Not that I could with my technique, but still.
 

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the main consequence is, your basically bound to do the move you just said
actually, its now, if you deviate from the move you said, instead of reinforcement, u get a loss in power, that way, you could declare an attack, but trick the opponent and hit them, but you wont do much dmg

also:
hatsu: materialization
name: invisible maze
dets: you conjure a big maze/labyrinth around everyone in a certain area, that is hidden from plain sight with in (can be seen with gyo of course), everyone must feel or gyo/en their way out
when activated, the maze is conjured around whoever is within the set area of the maze,
-the maze's height will be set at triple the tallest person's height, and the walls will of course go all the way to the top, and there is a cover
-if you escape the maze, you are now unaffected by the conjured material, meaning, (from the people in the maze's point of view), you can pass through the maze's walls, but to the guy who got out, it will be like normal, and you will be able to see everyone affected by the maze, walking around like a bunch of idiots (sitting ducks).
-maze size scales up with number of people being put in the maze
-you must have touched everyone being affected (like cheetah dudes nen, but this can be done to multiple ppl)
-everyone must be within the range of the maze (size goes as follows: 1 person (excluding yourself)-100m^2, 2ppl is 200, 3ppl is 300, etc) (the maze will be centered at the user, and if someone untouched is within the range, then the nen will fail to activate)
-people outside of the range of the maze when activated aren't affected whether or not they have been touched, but you cannot enter the maze's volume (in hidden walls)
-maze is randomly generated
-I liked this idea at the start, but now its weird
-awkward

I got the brutal honesty idea from my tkd master, who told us a story of an old action movie, where the guy was like "in 10 seconds, my foot is gonna be in your face and there not a goddamn thing you can do about it"
and I was like, oohhhh that's so cool

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double post:
hatsu: materialization
name: then do the harlem shake
dets: you conjure a mask/face covering headwear of some sort, and say "colo telo rita" or whatever the fuck the music is, and start doin a basic dance, and music starts playing from the mask (everyone should be able to hear is, cuz yo volume betta be on max when u listenin to dis)
after ~14 seconds, it/you say(s) "then do the harlem shake", and shit goes crazzzy, and music plays, and you spazzzzz out
meaning: random shit will be materialized within a sphere of radius depending of your strength
-user has very limited control over the conjuration, like you may be able to conjure an anvil over the head of the opponent
-were talking crazy random shit poppin up and fallin down and its a fuckin mess
-dangerous things can be conjured at random as well, like spiky balls and knives and acid and lava and other things like poop and tables, and grand pianos
-this goes on for about 15 more seconds, and then the musics stops and all the conjured stuff de-materializes.

-for the shit to pop (stuff to be conjured), the first ~14 seconds cannot be interrupted (the dance or the music), if the opponent removes the headwear, the music stops, if you stop the basic dance, the music stops
once it says then do the harlem shake, you can do whatever, like grab a materialized thing and start wailin, or dance along, whatever u want
-once it has been used/attempted, it cannot be used for another minute and thirty seconds
 

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LOL at harlem shake! xD
Is that like a new thing? cuz I just saw a video sent to me about it at the same day as I saw this post :p

I am not really getting the maze tho. Can't imagine how someone would use it to gain advantage.
I might be missing something here.
 

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Yeah its a recent meme
Its hilarious, the compilation videos on utube show almost all the good ones

The maze is basically whoever gets out of the maze can move freely through the maze area, while the person still inside the maze (if not using gyo) can see the person but is still bound by walls, so if there happens to b a wall in between the two people, the trapped guy cant attack through it, while the free guy can
Basically whoever gets out first can kill the other, so its a crapshoot whether u win or not (depends on how good you are at lifesize mazes :p). Gamblin with lives is fun
Also, I just recently was in a corn maze....

Also:
Hatsu: manipulation
Name: interrogative touch
Dets: if you touch a person and say a yes or no question, they will answer truthfully
Have to be touching the person for the entire question


Meh, i hate manipulation of people/minds
Illumi is a loser
 

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I enjoy that all your techniques are straight-forward. Really, really straight forward.

The touch could use a better name, though.
 

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Here's another one (and i haven't even finished refining my previous one yet...)

Hatsu: Ghosts from the Mind (specialist)

The User has the ability to freely create tatoos on his body of any shape or size. The User typically manipulates the tatoos into various Rorscarch ink blot shapes. What the target perceives the ink blot as comes into reality either through materiaization or augmentation/transformation of the User. The more strongly the target feels/reacts to the tatoos, the more powerful the effect and the more closely the materialized/transformed thing inherits the capability of the thing in the target's mind.

So for example, a typical shape used in these ink blot tests is the "butterfly" shape but many people see ghosts or moths or angels instead: see here http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikiped...chach_blot_01.jpg/200px-Rorschach_blot_01.jpg

The tatoos emanate a special kind of Nen that attracts the target's attention, the effect of which is strengthened significantly if the target looks at the tatoos with Gyo.

So the idea is to create a tatoo that resembles something that the target fears, admires, aspires to become, worships etc. thereby eliciting a powerful reaction from the target. Note however that Ghost is incapable of materializing anything the User actively/concretely knows the target will think of. So the User can't come into knowledge that the Target is scared of snakes and then materialize tatoos that look like snakes - the User must make an educated guess or through trial and error (like a psychoanalyst would do). Furthermore, the more abstract the shape, the more powerful the materialization.

As for the user himself, i think a heavily tatooed, highly emaciated goth punk with earrings and chains abound would be nice, though i am open to suggestions. Not really sure the "doctor type" appearance would work.
 

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That is some interesting ability. Were you studying psychology or those inkblots when you came up with it? :teehee
I would think that this would belong into Materialization as its main type.
While it is true that you are using some conditions with other types, the ability itself is to materialize the object (depending on the conditions).

I have few question tho:
When you create the object (that the target fears), what exactly will it do? Does it just act as the actual thing that was created, or will it try to attack the target regardless? Like if the target feared snakes, and you had something that resembled it, would you just create some snakes or will you have some control over them to attack and whatnot?

Also, is there a limit to things you create? If for example Kurapica was facing you, and you had a tattoo that he saw as a spider. He would react to it due to his feelings towards genei ryodan. In this case what will happen? His feelings are towards the group that is represented by the symbol that you provided. So would you materialize genei ryodan? One of them? or just the spider itself?

One last confusion about your condition of not knowing about what the target has strong feelings for. I don't think that it is really necessary just because it adds a lot of complications. If the target knows about this, telling you straight ahead about them would probably be enough to counter your ability. Since you need it to be more abstract to make it more powerful, the more you make it resemble what you know about the target, the weaker it will get. So I think it is fine without this condition.
 

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Heavenly Destruction
Type: Emission (with some Enhancement and Manipulation)
Ability: Can vaporize anything at a molecular level (molecular destruction).
Conditions: It can only be used in a set volume. A 3d object made out of nen has to be created to encase the nen sphere to contains the blast. While the object is in its base form it can pass thru anything, even nen (it can also vaporize nen). It can be detonated at any time by the user. There are 3 variants of shapes (the cube, the cone, and the cylinder) that can be made to use this ability effectively.
Notes: The original condition was to create a nen sphere that can vaporize anything but that was too hax so he changed it to be within a set volume. The original cube variant was only 1 inch and it pretty much took all of his nen to make it. He had to train for a long time in manipulation and enhancement to make larger cubes and to be able to control them effectively enough to use in battle outside of his body. After many years he was able to master the cube and expand it quickly and at any time.

The next variant was the cone. The way it works is that it is launched with emission and once detonated it vaporizes anything it comes into contact with. The AoE isnt as large as the cube but its more precise than the cube. Think of it like a ki blast from DBZ but is just goes thru things and vaporizes them if they enter its volume. Once detonated it only lasts for a few seconds but once he mastered this variant he is able to launch this attack at incredible speeds and while it travels thru the air it can vaporize anything as long as it lasts.

The final variant is the cylinder. It can be expanded to a very long range while being detonated. Unlike the cone variant it can be detonated for as long as the user can supply nen to the nen sphere to create the explosion within the cylinder. The user can expand the height and radius of the cylinder to make it very large and give it a lot of range and power. It kinda resembles a kamehameha lol. This is his most powerful attack and it takes the most nen to use. Even once he has mastered this technique and all the variants it still takes an incredible amount of nen to use but he can still can use it enough to be effective in a battle.

Weight Manipulation
Type: Manipulation (obviously)
Ability: Allows the user to "manipulate" the weight of any object he touches.
Conditions: The user must touch whatever object he wants to manipulate the weight of with his hands.
Notes:This technique was discovered while the user was training his manipulation for his heavenly destruction technique and was fully developed later on after it was completed.

When the user touches an object it is put in a state of weightlessness. Then nen the user applies to the area affect by the technique determines the weight of the object touched. It's actually the weight of his own nen that he manipulates.

So for example if u cover a rock entirely with ur nen the rock takes on the weight of ur nen. However is u cover half the rock with ur nen u can only weigh down the area that is covered by ur nen. The limit for how heavy u can make ur nen is 10 gigagrams (10000 tons) and the limit for how light u can make it is 0.1 nanograms. The user can change weight incredibly fast and at will. He can make objects float in the air then drop from very large heights to make a powerful impact.

When an object is made lighter the user essentially gains a limited form of telekinesis over it (think Shiki from One Piece). This technique can also be used on living things but if they are stronger enough to resist ur nen they can break free of the weight manipulation.

This technique can also be used on the user himself to enable him to fly and can also be apply to other ppl to make them float/fly of their own free will (if the user decides to let them do so and not control them). Another way the user can use this ability on himself is make his fists or legs weigh 10,000 tons right before they hit an opponent. Add a little ko and the power of the punch can rival even the strongest of enhancers.

When used against nen users it is usually concentrated with ko to place nen on only one area of the body to effect them. So say if u use this ability on a regular human ur nen will envelop their entire body, however on a nen user if the nen is more spread out it is easier for them to break out of it so the aura is concentrated on one part of the body instead of their entire body. For example if u apply ko to ur hand and grab ur opponents leg the area where u grabbed them will be weighed down instead of their entire body and they will have to use ko on the part u grabbed to break out of it. This is an extremely effective ability to use in battle because it leaves an opening u can exploit.

Enhanced IN
Type: Enhancement
Ability: The user can enhance his ability to use IN and cast it on himself to make him invisible to even nen users who can use gyo or en.
Conditions: The user can not use any other hatsu or attack anybody while this ability is active.
Notes: This is a very good ability for espionage and to confuse ur opponent during a battle. It can be used to get the drop on ur opponent in battle if they don't have any other means besides gyo or en to locate u or don't have good enough reflexes/speed to dodge u once u come out of it.

If this ability is used after u have used ur weight manipulation technique on something that objects will still have ur nen placed on it and whatever weight was placed on it stays until u come out and can manipulate it again.

The user for these abilities is an emitter and it took over 25 years to create and perfect these abilities. The user is an old man now and before he started developing his hatsu he went thru a training regiment similar to Netero to learn and perfect his nen. Even with his incredible ability in the basic techniques of nen it still took him an incredibly long time to master these hatsu and thats why they are so powerful because he has trained his aura for so long it is incredibly powerful, on the likes of Netero or Mereum to be precise.
 
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Three techniques? Huh. OH well, Hisoka has two but at least it's on the same school or really close.
The only one I liked was the wight one, although I think it needs a limit to be either for people OR objects. Both is a bit too hax.
 

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Three techniques? Huh. OH well, Hisoka has two but at least it's on the same school or really close.
The only one I liked was the wight one, although I think it needs a limit to be either for people OR objects. Both is a bit too hax.
I dont think its that bad being able to manipulate people and objects, what ur really doing is manipulating the weight of an object in general no matter what it is. How about the user can only manipulate up to 10 objects at a time, one for each finger.

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Ok here's another set of hatsu for a different character. This guy is also has incredibly powerful nen like the one for my previous hatsu. He is a conjurer with some specialist and transmutation mixed in. The character has doctor/surgeon themed hatsu and they are fueled by the emotions of his incredibly dark past. I'll give u his backstory now so you won't have any question on how he created such powerful abilities. O

He grew up on an island that had no authority or parents (kinda like an island version of Meteor City without any adult supervision, if there is any), the island is pretty much in a constant state of anarchy. It was an overcrowded island with lots of teenagers and young adults. It was also extremely violent and ppl died there everyday, but the weapons used to commit these murders were mostly swords instead of guns as there were pretty much no guns on the island and the ppl of the island have a deep culture and history of swordsmanship so there is an abundance of these swords. They are made and sold in the underworld of the country so the gangs and cartels of this country use swords instead of guns. The island is considered a humanitarian crisis as there is no government and any attempt to make one usually results in the death of the person trying to bring a change. You could say that it is a country ruled by gangs and organized crime, cartels, and chaos even though there is no official government. The top gangs of the country are as organized, powerful, and brutal as cartels. There are also unorganized gangs where ppl just run around killing ppl for the smallest of things (like an argument, stepping on somebodies shoes, bumping into someone without saying excuse me etc.) and they are offshoots of the organized gangs and cartels.

Now this is where the user comes in. We'll say his name is "Law". Law was exceptionally gifted as a child and he studied medicine with his family who were one of the few doctors on the island. He had a photographic memory and was smart enough to be considered a full fledged doctor/surgeon at the age of 12. A week Law passed the exam to be considered a certified doctor/surgeon his family was killed by an upcoming cartel gang over a drug dispute. He had a mom and dad, two older brothers, and a baby sister (she was about 2-3 years old), they were all killed in front of him. However since Law was an incredibly smart child he was allowed to work as a doctor for the same cartel that killed his family. For the next 15 years he would be traumatized by what happened to his family. While he was working for the cartel that killed his family he had to do all sorts of things. He had to do things like treating stab wounds, amputating people's limbs after they had been nearly cut thru, trying to reattach limbs that had been cut off, disposing of dead bodies of enemies and allies, removing organs from people's dead bodies (sometimes ppl were even still alive and he had to remove their organs). He had lost a lot of patients and there was death and chaos all around him. While growing up in this chaotic environment he took a vow to never kill anybody despite what anybody tells him and to treat anybody who needed the treatment of a doctor.

This vow of his almost led to him being beaten to death on multiple occasions for not killing when told and treating anybody who asked for his help. He pushed this ideal to its limits and became the best doctors/surgeons in the county (and one of the best in the world). He was able to treat anyone's wounds, he could amputate calmly and precisely, he could perform complicated and complex surgical procedures by himself and with great efficiency, he could even remove organs cleanly and sometimes without killing the patient, and he was also able to dispose of dead bodies without even blinking or showing any emotion (even though he still hated doing so and hated death in general). When he turned 16 it came time for him to buy a high-grade katana as was tradition for any gang member in his country (younger ppl are in gangs and use swords but they usually use very low grade katana or other very low-grade swords, they call them throwaways because they are low quality and are usually thrown away after they are used to kill). He was very opposed to this at first but after he was almost killed himself by an enemy he learned that he would need a way to defend himself. Once he bought his sword and trained in kenjutsu he developed a fighting style that was designed to not kill his opponent but to slash and maim them. When he had to fight someone (usually to defend himself as he wasn't sent on missions like rest of gang members) he gained a reputation for being a great fighter. He became known as the "Dark Doctor" or the "Surgeon of Death". The latter was ironic because he never killed anybody. Instead when he fought his aim was to maim or amputate an opponents limbs to disable them and to keep them from fighting anymore (this fighting style reflected his skills as a surgeon). He could also treat the person he cuts if he so chooses and he usually did because not a lot of people wanted to fight him after he gained his reputation.

When he turned 24 the cartel he was apart of was falling apart and the leader was about to be killed by a rival leader. The rival leader offered Law an opportunity to fight with them and kill the leader who was the same one who ordered the death of his family. Law declined the offer as it went against his beliefs and he decided to leave the island to take the hunter exam and become a treasure hunter. His goal is to find a legendary treasure which is rumored to be on an island in the seas of the outside world and use the money and whatever else is apart of the treasure to economically uplift his country, eliminate the cartels who run it, and establish a powerful and democratic government dedicated to the prosper of its people and all people (after they get their act together of course). The treasure is that of a legendary and ancient pirate crew who sailed the seas around the outside world and the dark continent who successfully returned from their journey telling of the things and riches they found but were killed off by the government of their country to protect a certain secret. Before the captain died however he gave one last speech as to where his treasure and the map to it are. This started an age of exploration all around the world to find the legendary treasure and go to the outside world but it ended in disaster and a huge catastrophe occurred in the human world. Ever since then it has been taboo to talk about the treasure and the outside world (eventually illegal to go there or even talk about it in most countries).

At the age of 25 Law easily passed the hunter exam. Later on he met one of the top 5 users (what incredible luck he has) and they taught him nen and he developed the following hatsu in a period of about 5-6 years. At the end of his training he is considered by some to be the 6th strongest nen user in the world (this is a debated topic in the HxH world and Hunter association, mostly by ppl who haven’t felt or seen his power) but he is extremely powerful regardless. He also learns through from his teacher that he has subconsciously been using nen ever since he was born which is why he is so powerful.

Sorry for the fanfic lol, but anyway here are his powers...

Blade of the Dark Doctor
Type: Conjuration/Specialization
Ability: It can cut anything, but kill nothing. (Its a type of spatial slice/manipulation so it can also be used on non living things. It causes no pain to a living person, it just separates their limbs from their body and they still function as usual). When an opponent is cut they don't bleed their body is just separated so if he cuts ur arm off it won't bleed or hurt it will just be detached from your body. It works the same as it would if it was attached.
Vows and Limits: Law cannot kill a living being with a sword or he'll die via heart attack. The sword itself cannot kill any living being no matter what. When a limb is cut off it still functions the same way it did while it was attached, so you can still move it (however since it is detached from your body it is harder to maintain proper nen and nen control in the detached limb and will lessen the further away it is from your body unless you are a strong enough emitter u can still apply a lot of nen at a farther range). Also at the point of separation Law must apply a layer of extra nen to protect your insides from infection or to stop blood from falling out. This is done at the moment of the cut provided Law has enough nen. Considering his incredibly high and strong nen pool its not really a problem for him.
Notes: This is the first hatsu created by Law. It is designed to cut off an opponents limbs using the same fighting style he developed in his home country but keeping the opponent from harm (bleeding and causing them pain like before in his country). The amount of aura needed to create this sword is about 50% of his overall battle aura but once it is conjured he should be able to de-conjure and re-conjure it at will (I think all conjurers can do this cant they?) but he still will have used up 50% of his aura.

The sword resembles a large and oversized nodachi that is as tall as him (he is 6'3) and it weighs several tons. It is also conjured with a sheath made out of steel. The sword is also made of steel (but is augmented with the strength of his aura like all conjured items I suppose).

With all of the aura put into the sword to make it plus all of the power his emotions and conditions to go with the sword and make it extremely powerful even without Law using shu to enhance it. For example if he used the sword "bare" so to speak of it could cut thru an enhancer as strong as Uvogin using Ko/Ryu to block like butter (remember this sword can cut thru anything including nen, however if your nen is strong enough you can block it) but someone as strong as Netero could block it using Ko/Ryu. If Law enhances his sword using Shu/Ko/Ryu it can becomes strong enough to slice thru an aura as powerful as Netero's. Your aura would have to be as strong as post-nuke Meruem or Ging and the top 5 users to be able to block his sword if he uses Shu on it. He usually doesn't use Shu to enhance his sword because as a conjurer has has to put a lot of nen into his enhancement to make it strong enough to overpower a nen user who can block his bare "sword". (this guy is pretty f*ckin strong isnt he?)

Also when a limb is detached from your opponents body it can be reattached just by putting it back to its original position. It can also be attached to any other solid surface but can always be removed until it is put back in its original position so once its back to its original position it can't be detached again and is back to normal. So for example if Law cuts your arm off he can go and stick it to a tree and leave. You (or anybody) would have to pull off the arm from the tree (not really hard but is stuck so you gotta use a little force) and reattach your arm. If you attach it anywhere else on your body it will just be stuck and you'll have to pull it off again to put it in the right spot. So Law uses this ability primarily just to troll people and confuse them. It is dangerous however because if he cuts you into enough pieces you are basically at his mercy. He can hide your body parts, throw them down the river, throw your head in the ocean and make you drown, etc.

Nen Scalpel
Type: Transmutation
Ability: Allows Law to transmute the aura in his hand (can be used with individual fingers as well) to resemble a scalpel. It has the same abilities as his sword.
Conditions(V&L): Same as "Blade of the Dark Doctor"
Notes: The purpose for this ability is to allow him to be able to use the effects of his sword on a much smaller and precise scale or to be able to use the same power as his sword if he can't use his main ability for some reason. He can also use this to cut out the internal organs of a person. Once it removes a persons internal organs from their body it must encase it in a nen shield (usually in the form of a cube) to protect it from outside infection and to keep it functioning properly. This is done on contact with the organ after it has been removed. Unlike Gon's Scissors the range for this ability only extends a few centimeters/inches out from his hand and fingers.

It's basically a mini handheld version of his sword.

Counter Shock
Type: Transmutation
Ability: Law puts his hands together and rubs them up and down like a defibrillator then places it upon an individual to give them an electric shock (like a defibrillator obviously). The power of the shock depends on how powerful the nen Law uses to transmute electricity is.
Conditions: Law can't use this technique to kill a living thing or he will die via heart attack (since Law knows how much electricity can kill a human it is easy for him to use it without killing). He can use it however to KO, paralyze, stun, or even if he uses it one someone head he can give them brain damage or even make them go brain dead (doesn't count as killing them)
Notes: The amount of electricity produced is directly proportional to how much nen he uses. If an opponent is strong enough to resist the nen of his electricity they can also resist the electricity itself. Or if they are just durable against electricity in general it won't harm them (like how Killua is resistant to electricity, so he wouldn't be harmed by this hatsu at all).

"OR" or "Operating Room" or just "Room" for short
Type: Emission
Ability: Emits a large sphere made of an incredibly thin and transparent film like material. It also allows him to use the techniques: Flying Spatial Slice, Scan, Tack, and Shambles while he is inside of the "room". You can walk in and out of it without disturbing its shape.
Conditions: There aren't really any Vows and Limits to this technique...
Notes: It almost looks like En but it isn't. Law uses this to his advantage to make ppl think he is an emitter using a manipulated sword when he use really a conjurer using a specialized sphere of nen. While within Law is within his "room" he can use his 4 special techniques that can only be done inside his room. He can increase and expand the size of the room at will and extremely fast. Its maximum range is over several kilometers. It takes over 40% of his nen to create and extend it to max range but if he de-conjures his room he absorbs all of that nen back unlike his sword. This process is also done extremely fast because of his extremely fast aura control (Ryu).

It also coats anything inside of the room with a thin layer of the Law's nen allowing him to spatially manipulate them using tack or shambles. It can be easily resisted by a nen user however. In order for Law to be able to spatially manipulate a nen user (use shambles on them) he must cut them into pieces so they can't use nen properly and resist his nen. So for example if he cut off Gon's arm he could use shambles on his arm to spatially manipulate it but if he used it on Uvogin (for this example we'll say he has far stronger nen and nen control than Gon) he wouldn't be able to manipulate his arm and therefore he would have to cut him into more pieces to disrupt Uvo's flow and control him easier. So if he were to cut someone in half it would not be enough because a significant amount of nen would still be left in their bodies to resist his. So he would have to keep cutting them to mess with the power and distribution of his opponents nen to gain proper control over them.

"Room" exclusive techniques:

Flying Spatial Slice-Makes the effect from Law's slash with his sword (not his scalpel) extend to the end of the rooms range. Similar to a flying air slash or wind slash you would see in another series. For example if he made a slash gesture towards a house without actually touching it with his sword it would still be cut in half if within range of his room and withing the angle and direction of his slash. The slash is cannot be stopped by any object and extend all the way to the edge of the room. So if Law were to extend his room beyond the house into a forest behind it he would also cut the trees that were at the same angle of the slash. The only way to resist this slash is to use nen. However this slash isnt that powerful since it uses emission. It can be block be most nen users. It is primarily used to cut objects and ppl who can't use nen so that they can be used in conjunction with his other room techniques.


Scan-When used it emits a pulse of nen that extends to the edge of the room allowing Law to scan everything in the room for about a second, similar to a radar ping. Effectively making his room into a greater version of En. Allowing him to use a better version of nen without even using En. Since it is basically an emission technique it costs a lot of aura to use and it can't detect a nen user that is using zetsu or In. This prevents Law from spamming is but after it is used once because of Law's photographic memory he can remember where everything is (or where it was before its position was moved). Mainly used to detect objects in the room to use tack and shambles on and not to detect other nen users.

Tack-Allows Law to propel any object in his room under the control of his nen to the edge of his room. Similar to sticking something to a wall with a thumbtack it will stay stuck on the edge of the room once it reaches the edge. When an object is propelled by Tack it's motion cannot be stopped unless you can overpower the nen manipulating it or it reaches the edge of the room (when it reaches the edge its motion is stopped instantly). It uses manipulation to propel an object in a straight line in the direction that Law chooses. He has to focus on the object and use his fingers to choose the direction and propel the object, so he usually propels one object at a time (however it is possible to propel multiple objects at once while the others are in motion, he can also use shambles on them mid flight). Law can choose which side he wants to tack to the edge of his room so for example if he uses tack on a pointed boulder he can use it on the bottom of the boulder and it will rotate mid-flight so the bottom edge will be tacked to the edge. This allows Law to rotate the boulder even though it has to move in a straight line. Law uses this effect in conjunction with Shambles to allow him to propel the object in any direction and use it anywhere in the room. Shambles also doesn't slow down the acceleration and force behind the tack to make it more effective in a combat scenario.

Shambles-The greatest technique Law can use in his room, it falls under the category of emission/manipulation. Allows him to "swap" any object with another in his room using spatial manipulation. He can swap anything coated with his nen in the room (which is everything but objects coated with another's nen) including himself, like goreinu can do with his nen apes. He can also swap an object with a volume of air that is the same size and volume as the object. This is known as an "air swap". It is much harder to do than a regular swap and takes much more nen but once used it looks appears to be like teleportation and will confuse your opponent. Law can use this on and object propelled by tack to teleport the object closer to the opponent and make it much harder to dodge and since tacks acceleration won't be stopped by Shambles it can be used as an incredibly dangerous attack. For example if Law cuts a huge rock and uses tack to throw it at you and you jump high in the air to dodge it he can use shambles+tack again to change the angle the rock was thrown towards you and teleport it close to ur location so you can't dodge in midair all without losing the speed used in the previous tack. It is an incredible dangerous ability and powerful ability and combination. Law can also use Shambles and Tack on himself to teleport of move faster.

With all of these abilities combined plus Law's intelligence, photographic memory, and incredible level of nen and efficiency-(which is max for each category) he is regarded as one of the strongest and most powerful hunters in the HxH world.

Sorry for the lol fanfic and length of this post but I've had been thinking of these abilities for a long time and now I can finally have them shared and posted somewhere.

EDIT: After thinking about it i decided to change the user to emission and redo the hatsu types for this one.
 
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Oh! You know the story of Trafalgar Law? You must be Oda.I think those abilities are overpowered,but IMO "Room" should be emission /manipulation technique.Conjuration techniques are material so conjuring a Nen sphere should not look like En.Also you use a lot of manipulation.

I want to ask,Law is a specialist? Even if he is. To be able to use so many different Nen techniques:gwah.

Room could be better if you add conditions.
 

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simple :) i can transmute my aura into water .. im still thinking of good abilities hehe :)
 

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Law's sword is kind of the opposite of the first ability in this forum. This one cuts everything but causes no pain, while the other one cuts nothings but causes pain instead. That is pretty neat :3

I want to ask,Law is a specialist? Even if he is. To be able to use so many different Nen techniques:gwah.
I think that he is a Materializer. His first two abilities are both Materialization (assuming the scalpel was a mistype?). He can use Transmutation abilities (like his third one) since it is close to Materialization at 80%.
For the sword and the room, I don't think they need to be Specialization techniques. Materialized items can have different powers without the need for them to be in the Specialization category.

These are some pretty awesome abilities and really fit well with the character you created. It shows that you actually had thought about this for some time. ;)
Having said that, I do agree that the room might need some more conditions. Maybe something has to be done before you create it.
 

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It's about expanding your own aura and manipulate objects inside it, I think the Emission/Manipulation is more precise to describe the technique.

Of course, in HxH you can achieve the same techniques with different Hatsus so it's mainly how you approach it.
 

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It's about expanding your own aura and manipulate objects inside it, I think the Emission/Manipulation is more precise to describe the technique.

Of course, in HxH you can achieve the same techniques with different Hatsus so it's mainly how you approach it.
Yea pretty much. Law also always has his sword out so most of his opponents think he is and Emitter/Manipulator so he uses that to his advantage when he fights to further confuse his enemy.
 
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