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[mikkih]

Re: Need help with a few lines from "Replica"

I know that this is a reply to an older post, but I make an entry as I enjoyed this manga.

1. そら　ちょっと、人（ひと）斬（き）ったり　暴（あば）れたり　してきたがよ...

あばれる not わぼれる

2. 精神論（せいしんろん）is the theory that mental power can overcome the physical problems such as injuries and diseases.

ねじ伏（ふ）せましたね --　ねじ伏せる　here is "win the discussion" `

Translation: You convinced the boy by telling the mental power can cure him.


3. デコ＝額（ひたい）/ forehead　　　ガキ/brat
デコガキ brat with a big forehead

The same guy will call him (カル) "デコ”　again later (See chapter 2, page 62).

 

[ultramanmattia]

translation in italiano of chapter 1 of kinnikikuman

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i think this is the perfect place to publish my translation of the manga kinnikuman.


KINNIKUMAN VOLUME 1

salvate il pianeta kinniku!!

capitolo 1:i mostri spaziali attaccano!!!

pag.5

narratore:anno,1979.
la più grande minaccia mai incontrata dalla terra...si avvicina.


pag.6
(la prima vignetta fa vedere i mostri che si avvicinano)

forza di difesa terrestre.

ufficiale: huh?
signore!!! grossi guai!!

capitano: mh? che cos'è?

ufficiale: oltre cento mostri spaziali sono sulla via di attaccare la terra!!!

capitano:cosa?!!!

ufficiale:alla loro attuale velocità di mach 2 arriveranno in giappone alle 12 in punto.


capitano:cavolo,solo in un ora!!

OK!! contatta gli ultra fratelli immediatamente,e anche i supereroi americani!!

ufficiale: si signore!!!

cuffie: pi pi pi

pag.7

ufficiale: capo!!!
gli ultra fratelli sono andati in vacanza alle calde sorgenti e non sono disponibili!!!

capitano: cosa?!!
riguardo a pp-man?

pp-man: be...ho appena portato il mio mantello alla lavanderia quindi non posso venire in giappone adesso..

ufficiale: non bene,signore!!

capitano: allora spiderman?

ufficiale: è scivolato giù da un muro ed è tutt'ora sotto cure intensive...

capitano: ma quel che riguarda tutti gli altri?!!!

ufficiale: non bene,signore!!
gli altri sono fuori a passare del tempo con le loro famiglie!!!

pag,8

capitano: AHH!!cosa stai facendo?!!

annunicatore: e entrambi i lottatori collidono nel mezzo del ring!!

qualche pesante azione di chop!!

e adesso una presa alla gamba,sembra che il capo provi dolore!!

ufficiale: huh?

capitano: whahahaha la chiami questa una mossa?!!!!

annunciatore: e il capo vince il primo match di queste 3 battaglie di 60 minuti!!!

pag.9

uomo con occhiali da sole: capo!!

capitano: cosa?

occhiali da sole: questo non è il momento per 60 minuti di 3 match di wrestling.

capitano: allora un singolo match di 30 minuti..

occhiali da solo: vi dico di fermarvi!!!

capitano: ma...qui siamo nei guai...
senza un singolo supereroe...aspetta!! c'e ne uno!!
uno veramente maldestro che ammira ultraman e prova a proteggere il giappone dai mostri,ma perde sempre.
(nell'ottava vignetta si vede una casetta e nella nona si vede kinnikuman che mangia il gyuudon)

pag.10

occhiali da sole:ho portato kinnikuman
kinnikuman: huh?
capitano: oh!! sei qui mr.gyuudon!!

la ragione per cui ti ho chiamato è semplice.
abbiamo bisogno di te per proteggere la terra dagli invasori.

kinniku: chi? io?
non avevate bisogno di chiamarmi.
per quello ci sono ultraman e pp-man.

capitano: hmm...non posso dirglielo..che gli ultra fratelli si stanno godendo una vacanza alle calde sorgenti.

be,gli ultra fratelli e i supereroi americani...sono a una importante conferenza nello spazio.

kinniku: conferenza?
tutti i super eroi sono via per una conferenza?

capitano: cavolo,non avrei dovuto dirlo.
mi sa che la prossima vignetta sarà piena di estremo panico...

pag.11

kinniku: perchè non sono stato invitato!?

capitano: avevo ragione..

kinniku: be,va bene.
portatemi i mostri spaziali.
loro sono niente!!

capitano: ohh!!
lo farai allora?

ti daremo qualche dato sui mostri.

occhiali da sole:il primo è okamarasu.

kinniku: hehehe.....okamarasu è niente.
facile facile.

ufficiale: wow,che fiducia!!
questo tipo di fiducia può essere avuta sconfiggendo già il nemico.

pag.12

occhiali da sole: il prossimo è eraginesu.

kinniku: non avrò bisogno di spingere le mie scorreggie!!(nota del traduttore:questa è la frase fatta di kinnikuman che in giapponese è ''He no tsuppari wa iran desu yo'')

ufficialen ho idea di che diavolo significhi ma ...ma che fiducia!!

occhiali da sole: e abdora.
è uno dei mostri spaziali più cattivi.
hey!!! che cosa fai?

kinniku: ho paura..

occhiali da sole: idiota!!!

capitano:allora,kinnikuman!!

kinniku: ahh!!

capitano: che fai se abdora fa questo?

kinniku: faccio questo!!

pag.13

capitano: e se fa questo?

kinniku: farò questo!!!

capitano: ma è cattivo.
potrebbe fare questo!!

kinniku: ahh!!

ufficiale: hai usato un arma.

capitano: no!! no!!

occhiali da sole: il prossimo è sheik-seijin.

hmm...quei vestiti e quel cammello..dev'essere un wrestler del medio oriente...


occhiali da sole: non ci sono wrestler!!
sono mostri spaziali!!!

capitano: oh si.

pag.14

capitano: questo è acrobat-seijin

non puoi mai dire dove avrà intenzione di attaccare.

kinniku: contro un nemico che può attaccare dappertutto...mi piace usare..finger pops!!!

(finger pops che colpiscono il capitano: po po po)

capitano: davvero una grande tecnica.
ma non potrai sconfiggere i mostri spaziali con questa..

signor kinnikuman!!
non hai una mossa finale?!!!

kinniku; ugh?

(l'ottava vignetta e piena di kanji che significano:mossa finale)

pag.15

kinniku: da quel giorno ho iniziato il mio allenamento...in modo per creare una tecnica che superi il kinniku flash....ho affrontato di tutto.

(uuu...questo è niente.)

anche una schiena che pizzica.

e l'ho finalmente completata!!!

kinniku:capo....

capitano: oh!! kinnikuman!!

kinniku: ho padroneggiato la mossa finale.

capitano: questo è grande,hoshi!!!

(cartello: conferenza stampa mossa finale di kinnikuman)

kinnikuman: ci ho messo 4 anni per imparare questa mossa finale.

capitano: bugiardo,erano solo 4 vignette...

pag.16

kinniku: eccola....



capitano; è grande...ma quanto tempo ci vuole?

kinniku: hayaa!!!

capitano: wow!!

kinniku: questa mossa usa un po della mia energia all'aglio..
per momenti come questi usa il mio speciale accendino della jump(nota del traduttore:famoso settimanale per ragazzi giapponese)e...mangio qualche aglio arrosto.

pag.17

kinniku: ok, sto meglio!!

capitano: wow,questa cosa è ganza!

ufficiale: è simpatica, non è vero capo?

kinniku: non toccare!!

orologio: 11:55

ragazzo: cosa?!! i mostri spaziali sono sulla loro via?

kinniku: già!!


ragazzo: è ok,gli ultra fratelli ci salveranno.

kinniku: devo dirvelo...gli ultra fratelli non stanno venendo.

persone: ahh!!scappate!! dobbiamo andarcene dal giappone!!!


pag.18

kinniku: tutti quanti,non c'e bisogno di scappare.
sono qui per proteggervi!!!

kinniku: ohh!! voi credete in me!!!

ragazzi: diavolo no!!abbiamo solo perso la barca.

kinniku: non preoccupatevi lasciate tutto a me.


kinniku: ops. me ne è caduto uno.

(nell'ultima vignetta della pagina kinnikuman diventa gigante)


pag.19

ragazzo: tutti scappano via per cose del genere, idiota.

kinniku: uuuu....bravi cittadini della terra!!!

sono in ottime condizioni,fatevi sotto mostri spaziali!!

orologio: 12:10

kinniku: ehi...sono gia passate le 12..

ufficiale :capo!! i mostri spaziali....!!!

capitano: cosa?!! sono qui?!!!


ufficiale: no!! hanno detto che non vogliono combattere con un idiota come kinnikuman e sono tornati indietro.
(l'ultima vignetta mostra tutti che stramazzano al suolo)

END of chapter 1







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[Popo]

Soul Eater 73

I did this yesterday, but it looks like Mangahelpers beat me to it.

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暗い…… すべてを飲みこむような闇だ――…
Kid: It’s dark…/A darkness black enough to swallow everything…

2
右も左もない…これは左右対称を越える左右一体…　これは「無」だか…
Kid: There’s neither left nor right… this is symmetry that far surpasses what we merely call symmetry… /Is this what “nothing” is?

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「無」こそ規律の最終地点―…　生きとし生けるもの…すべてに課せられた規律　すなわち「死」―…　死神が求めていたのはコレだったのか…？
Kid: Surely then, it is precisely at “nothing” where order itself ends…/ Life and the living…the law governing everything/Namely, death…/Is this what I have been seeking?

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コロス…　この世のすべてを排除する…　それが死神が守るべき「規律」だ
Kid: KILLING…/To eradicate everything from this world…/That is the law a Reaper must uphold.
第７３話：Salvage～サルベージ～（その２）
Chapter 73: Salvage (Part 2)
Atsushi Ohkubo

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発狂
MADNESS
それがお前の狂気…　どうだ！？断片…
Black Mass: That is your form of madness…/And how is it? Speck...

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第一章―…LUST「色欲」
Chapter One: Lust
モゾモゾ
Sfx: Shf shf
ファイヤとサンダーも性別が入れ替わってしまったみたいね…　あれ？何か…言葉遣いが…女としての自覚が生まれているの？
Kirikou: It seems as if Fire and Thunder have switched sexes too…/ What?/Has my speech been reborn into a feminine form as well?

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うふ～ん
Succubus: Ufuuu~n
ダ…ダメだ。鼻血が止まらないぞ
Maka: Sh...shit. The blood won’t stop rushing…
…　最低ね…あんな低俗な女に反応するなんて　しょせんマカも下世話な人間ってことかしら
Soul: …/You’re the worst…Getting turned on by such a vulgar woman./I daresay that you indeed are quite the commoner, Maka.
……ソウル…もともとおぼっちゃんか知らないケド　女になってすごい感じ悪いよ
Maka: …Soul, you may have been raised a little rich boy,/But ever since you became a chick you’ve been a real buzzkill.

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ねーねー椿もこーふんしているのか！？世界で一番の私がパートナーなのにか？
Black Star: Hey Tsubaki, are you aroused too? Even though you have the best partner in the entire world right here?
エ！？ブラックスター…！！む…胸があってる…
Tsubaki: Wha?!/Black Star…!!/Your b…breasts are touching…
マカはまじめなおぼっちゃん…ソウルは高飛車お嬢…ブラックスターは天真爛漫娘…椿は相変わらずブラックスターに振り回されてる感じか…
Liz: So Maka’s some straight-laced spoiled boy, Soul’s a prude, Black Star’s a naïve beauty, and Tsubaki, as always, is the type to be shown off by Black Star, huh?
意外に俺ら変わんねェのな…
Patti: We didn’t really change at all though…

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でもなんか俺…女だったトキよりますますバカになってる気がすんだよな　男になってわかったが…マジでアホなコトばっか考えてんだよ
Liz: But like…When I was a girl, I didn’t feel like I was getting dumber./When I turned into a man though, I got it…Seriously, I’m only thinking about retarded shit.
わかるぜ兄貴　なんかわかんねェケドすげェ暴れてェんだよな　誰でもいいから殴り跳ばしてェ
Patti: Naw dawg, I got it./I don’t really get why, but I’m pretty fuckin’ angry./ I don’t give a damn who, but I want to beat the shit outta someone.
オウ目次コラ！！　一発殴らせて
Patti: AY YO, TABLE OF CONTENTS. /Let me hit you just once.
や…　やめんか
ToC: P…/please don’t.
うふぅ～
Succubus: Ufuu~

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うひょ—
Liz and Patti: Daaaaamn
ちょっと！キッドを助けに行くんだろ！！　こんな所でちんたらしてるヒマなんてないじゃない　どうしよう… ブレアはあんまり変わってないみたいだけど
Kirikou: You guys! Weren’t we going to save Kid?!/We don’t have the free time to dillydally about here!/Whatever should we do…?/…/Blair doesn’t seem to have changed much, but…
にゃ　私は誘惑されるよりする方だからね。それはオスににゃっても同じさ
Blair: Nya/It’s because I prefer turning people on myself. It’s the same no meowtter whether or not I’m a Tomcat.

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フン　私はこの程度のエロス空間で取り乱すほどのエロ大魔王じゃにゃいのさ　しょうがない…一肌脱ぎましょうか…
Blair: Hah./In Eros’ dominion, with everyone so distracted, attention should be directed toward Asmodeus, should it nyot?/There’s no helping it…shall I lend a hand?
Soul: !!

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！！メロ～
Succubus:!!/HOT~!
きれいな瞳してるね。吸いこまれそうだ
Blair: You have such gorgeous eyes…I’m losing myself in their being.
メメロン
Succubus: Hohot

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パンパンプキンパンプキン　パンプキン砲（イケメンVer）
Blair: Pumpum pkin pumpkin/Pumpkin Cannon! (Bewitchingly Hot Version)
うぎゃあー
Succubus: Ugyaaa!!

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さあ　次の章に進みましょう
Blair: Well then, how about we continue to the next chapter?
ブレアの言う通りだわ　目次…頼みます
Soul: It’s just as Blair says. Table of Contents, please.
もう「色欲」に未練はないのだな…
ToC: None of you will have any regrets leaving ‘Lust,’ will you?
こんな所…斜め読みで十分よ
Maka: I’m fine with just skimming this chapter.
よかろう
ToC: Very Well.

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な…
Maka: What the…
何？！
Soul: What is this?!

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世界がめくり上がっていく？！
Black Star: The world is folding over!
うわぁああああぁああ
Everyone: AAaAAaAAHH!!

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ここは？
Tsubaki: Where are we?
クンクン　なんかすごうまそうな匂いがするな
Black Star: *sniff sniff*/Something smells reaaally good, don’t it?
あっちの方から匂いがするぞ
Patti: The smell’s comin’ from over there!

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第二章―Gluttony「暴食」
Chapter Two: Gluttony

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うおー!!
Black Star: Whoa!!
うまそ―
Patti: Looks delicious!
第二章「暴食」…特に説明は不要だろう…
ToC: Chapter Two, “Gluttony”…I don’t believe any explanation is necessary.
性欲の次に食欲か…エイボンって「ノーパンしゃぶしゃぶ」とか好きな類なのか…
Liz: So after sex comes food, huh? Eibon must’ve been the type that liked “No Panties Shabu-Shabu” restaurants…
たこにも　いいかも
ToC: Octzactly/That may be the case.

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それよりも一章の「色欲」を越えたはずなのに…体が元に戻ってませんが…　言葉遣いや性格は戻りましたけど
Tsubaki: More importantly than that, even though we finished the Lust chapter, we did not return to our original bodies…/Although, our dialects and personalities returned to normal.
当たり前だ…罪は背負っていかなければならん―…章をまたいだとはいえ簡単に罪がなくなるワケはなかろう　直に戻るはずだが…　欲の強い者ほど戻りは遅くなる…この場合…「色欲」だな…
ToC: It is just as you say…You must bear the weight of your sins. After you’ve entered a chapter, it isn’t a simple feat to lose the effects of sin./You should return to your former selves soon…/But those who are particularly desirous of that sin will change back more slowly than others…In this case, Lust.
エー？！
Liz: What?!
そ…そんなの…最後まで残った人は大恥じゃないですか！？
Tsubaki: Th...that kind of…Whoever transforms last is going to be really embarrassed, will they not?!

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まあーどうせソウルとかでしょ
Maka: Whatever. It’s obviously going to be Soul.
ハア？！　何で俺なんだよ…お前だって鼻血垂れ流してたじゃねェか
Soul: What?!/Why would it be me? You’re the one whose “blood wouldn’t stop rushing.”
まあこれで　誰か一番エロイかわかっちまうわけか？　おもしろそうだな
Kirikou: Well anyways,/I guess this means we’ll see who here’s the biggest perv./That should be interesting.
そ…そんな…　全然面白くないわキリク君　…　もし…私が最後まで残ったら　どうしよう…！！
Tsubaki: T…/That’s not interesting at all, Kirikou-kun!/If…I were the last one to turn back…/What am I going to do?!

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座標軸安定　そのまま維持を
Eruca: Coordinate axes stable. Maintaining levels.
こちらブレア、こちらブレア…　ただ今一章を抜けて二章を読んでるところだよ～
Blair: This is Blair. I repeat, this is Blair./Currently, we’ve finished chapter one and now we’re reading chapter two~
死神様！先程ブレアから報告が入りました
Jacqui: Lord Death! Moments earlier, we received word from Blair.

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スパルトイただ今第二章まで進行中…　シュタイン先生、マリー先生、死人先生、ナイグス先生はノアの拠点を目指しました
Jacqui: At the moment, the Spartoi unit is passing through chapter two./M. Stein, Mlle. Marie, M. Sid, and Mlle. Neigus are en route to Noah’s base.
これでうまくいけば挟み撃ちのような形になるわけだねー
Death: If this goes smoothly, we’ll be able to attack simultaneously from both sides.
こっちだ…連いて来てくれ
Tezca: This is it…c’mon.

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すごい
Kirikou: Amazing.
どこもメシ屋ばかった
Soul: No matter where you look, it’s all restaurants.
パティちゃん、ブラックスター！勝手に食べたらダメじゃない
Tsubaki: Patti-chan, Black Star! You can’t just eat anything you want!
もぐもぐもぐもぐもぐもぐ
Patti and Black Star: munchmunchmunchmunchmunchmunchmunchmunch
あっちの方にもあるぞー！！
Black Star: It’s over there too!!
だっしゅ！！
Patti: Dash!!

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おー今度はあれなんかうまそー！
Black Star: Whoa-ho! This time that looks really good!
どうしたの？まるで…取り憑かれてるみたい…
Tsubaki: What should I do? It’s as if…they’ve been possessed…
一つ一つ罪を重ね…最後に待っているのは「発狂」―…　耐えられるか、耐えられるか…　魂の真価が問われる―…
ToC: One by one, your sins grow…/awaiting you in the end is only madness./Can you bear it? Can you withstand it?/The worth of your souls is being judged …

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オレのメシ勝手に喰うのは許さんぞ―！！
Pig: I ain’t forgivin’ you for eatin’ my grub!!
豚？！
Black Star: A pig?!
また裸エイプロンだー
Patti: Again with the Naked Apron?
ブラックスター…
Tsubaki: Black Star!
パティ
Liz: Patti!

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男になって…武器状態もなんか武骨な感じになってんな
Black Star: Tsubaki...Ever since you became a man, your weapon form kinda feels clumsy.
お姉ちゃんは変わってないね
Patti: Sis didn’t change at all.
銃にはそーゆうのあんまねェんじゃねェーの
Liz: Guns don’t really change much.
オレのお肉はお前らが今まで食べたことがないような超極上モンだ！　はっきり言って超高級牛肉すらオレのお肉の味には足元にも及ばねェ。脂もサラッと口の中でとろける極上の美味しさだぜ！！
Pig: Much more so than the crap you all have been eatin’, my meat is prime cut!/To put it in terms you can understand, my meat is pork of such fine flavor that my hooves are more delectable than anythin’ you ever ate! My tallow is so delicious that it will melt within your mouths!
Everyone: …
お前を喰ってやるっ！！
Pig: And now you’re my dinner!!

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ふざけんな！！　俺達が喰ってやるぁああ！！
Black Star, Patti, and Kirikou: FUCK THAT!! We’re eating YOU!!
ぎゃああああああ
Pig: GYAAAAAAAAA

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ぎゃああああ
Pig: GYAAAA
ファイア!!
Kirikou: FIRE!!

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俺の腕がぁ！！
Pig: MY ARRRM!!
うめェー！！
Black Star: AWESOME!!

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私も食べたくなってきちゃった
Maka: I gotta get me some of that…!
目次！！早く次の章へ　こんな所にいたらおかしくなる
Soul: Table of Contents!! Get us to the next chapter, quick!/If we stay here any longer, we’re going to go insane!
了解した…
ToC: Understood…

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きたきた
ToC: Here it comes!

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こわ　アレ　ここって
Maka: Jesus./Huh?/Am I in…?

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死武専！？　どうなってんの？本の中にいたはずなのに…戻って来ちゃったの…？　それにそんなもいない…
Maka: DWMA?!/What the hell is this? Weren’t we supposed to be in the book…? So we’ve returned?/But nobody else is here…

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あなたは
Maka: You are…?
似合わない
Pig tails: You don’t match at all.

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あなたはソウル先輩にふさわしくない
Pigtails: You aren’t appropriate for an upperclassman like Soul.
な…何だよ
Maka: What the…? What do you want?

ソウル先輩はわたせない
Pigtails: I want you to give me Soul.

第三章―…ENVY「嫉妬」
Chapter Three: Envy

 

[mikkih]

Re: Soul Eater 73

I did not read the whole thing. I only saw the last phrase, and noticed...
Translations for ソウル先輩（せんぱい）はわたせない。are more like:
I can't let you have Soul. (or) You can't have Soul.

 

[Popo]

Re: Soul Eater 73

I did not read the whole thing. I only saw the last phrase, and noticed...
Translations for ソウル先輩（せんぱい）はわたせない。are more like:
I can't let you have Soul. (or) You can't have Soul.

Yeah, I made a few liberal decisions like that. I translated Maka's な…何だよ as "What the…? What do you want?" and decided to have the pigtails girl's final line a direct response by using "I want you to give me" instead of "I can't let you have." Of course, there was a problem in this in case it turns out that the pigtails girl isn't the meister who wants Soul and instead is working on someone else's behalf, but I went for it anyways.

Thanks for your input!

 

[Popo]

Hunter x Hunter 307

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喪失
Chapter 307: Loss
煽り：終局…　ゴンとピトーは…!!
Side: The Conclusion of Gon against Pitou is…!!
"電光石火"により驚異的な早さでゴンの元へ着いたキルアが聞いたのは
With the superb speed of “Denkou Sekka,” Killua, arriving at Gon’s side, heard something.

2-3
鋸で鋼の弦を弾くかの様な硬質の不協和音 そして目にしたものは 自身が知る者とは全く違う輪郭（シルエット）の 幾度となく振り下ろしたのであろう血に塗れた拳が
Narrator: A cacophonous dissonant chord, like violin strings being played with a saw.\ And in front of his eyes,\ the completely different silhouette of the boy he knew\swinging downward an innumerable amount of times with his bloodstained fist—

キルア：あれは…どっちの!?　　ゴン!!
Killua: That’s…Where is…?! Gon!!
ゴンさん：ジャン…ケン…
Gon: Jan…Ken…

4-5
既に屑切れの様に横たわるピトーの頭部を 砕く瞬間であった
Narrator: And the instant in which the ragged, outstretched remains of Pitou/ had its head smashed.
キルア：……
Killua: …
ゴンさん：カイト　
Gon: Kite…

6-7
教わった通り…　とどめを刺したよ だから……
Mr. Gon: Just as you taught me…/I made the finishing blow./So…
キルア：ゴン…　なのか…？
Killua: …/Is that you…Gon…?
ゴンさん：キルア…
Mr. Gon: Killua…
[すぐにビスケを連想したキルアだったが 全く異質のものだと直感した]
Narrator: Killua was immediately reminded of Biscuit/But he perceived that what Gon had done was completely different.
（ビスケは容姿が激変しただけで内包するオーラが爆発的に増加したわけじゃない
何よりビスケは元の姿に戻っただけ!!　けどゴンは逆!!）（何年…!?　十数年!?　何十年!?）
（絶え間無い修行を経て　ようやくたどり着くはずの姿!!）（どれほどの代償を払えば　これだけのオーラを…!!）
Killua: Biscuit only could change her appearance; her volume of aura never exploded alongside it!/And above all else, it was her original form Biscuit was returning to!!/But for Gon, it’s the opposite!!/How many years…?! Ten years?! How many decades?!/There was absolutely no time for him to train himself/But this is the kind of form finally reached after years of work!!/Just what the hell did he have to sacrifice/In order to gain this kind of aura…?!!

10-11
[ピトーの"黒子舞想"が　王の為　死後さらに強大となった念を纏い
Narrator: Pitou’s Terpsichora,/for the King’s sake,/remained active and became even more powerful post-mortem.

12
[ゴンの抹殺だけが目的の躯人形と化し　追撃を加えんと躊躇する構えを見せた]
[瞬きすら許されない薄く細い時間の切れ目に　キルアは確かに聞いた]
Narrator: The corpse Gon had seemingly obliterated had become a marionette;/He saw the increase in its pursuit, the hesitation in its stance./And during an increment of time so minute that one could not even blink/Killua surely heard.

13
　大丈夫 痛くないよ 強がりじゃない 少しだけ 嬉しい やっと…
Gon: It's all right./It doesn't hurt./I'm not bluffing./I'm actually a little.../glad./Finally...

14.
　カイトと同じになれた あの時の… 少しだけ 救われた
Gon: Pitou and I have become just like Kite./Just like back then…/By just a little bit…/You saved me.
(ゴン…)
Killua: Gon…

16
ゴンさん：おおおおおおおおおおおおおおお
Gon: OHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

17.
：最
Gon: SHOW
（右腕はやるよ）
Gon: My right arm will do it.
：初は
Gon: ME
：お前も
Gon: You too.
（もう）
Gon: Well,
：グー!!
Gon: ROCK!!
（おやすみ…）
Gon: ‘night…

18
キルア：ゴン!!　駄目だ!!　そんな!!　もうこれ以上　そんな力!!　一体!!　この先!!　どれ程の…!!
Killua: GON!!/STOP IT!! THAT...!! If you use any more of that power...!!/JUST WHAT THE HELL...!! After this...!! Just how far...?!
ゴンさん：ジャン　ケン
Gon: JAN/KEN

19
煽り：喪失はあまりに大きく…
Side: To think that the loss would be this great…

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I changed a line in my translation. I translated "カイトと同じになれた," as "I've become just like Kite." It makes sense because of the parallel in Gon's lost arm. But it might also mean "He's become just like Kite" in reference to Pitou--his mechanical movements are the same as the puppet he fought during their first reunion. So I reverted it to "Pitou and I have become just like Kite."

 

[kewl0210]

Re: Hunter x Hunter 307

It's more like "Just like with Kaito" he means like when Kaito's right arm was blown off.

I'm almost done with my translation, yours is pretty good though.

 

[unok-kun]

Shounen Shikku 1

So, I'm a noob translator, my Japanese sucks, I have to look up every single word in the dictionary, and to beat that, my English isn't even good enough. Adding that this chapter is 50 pages long, and that it's about soccer, I don't think I can get too many people to check and proofread... But if no one points out all my many mistakes there's no way I'll ever learn

TL: http://mangahelpers.com/t/unokpasabaxaki/releases/23028

Raw: http://www.mediafire.com/?olmezwxzzim

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Didn't notice the raw I posted didn't have the cover ^^

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/4358/shonenshikkuch00100.jpg

 

[stlwright]

Chapter 1 of Nozaki Ana

Hello can someone do a translation check/proofread for the ecchi manga Nozaki Ana.

Here is the translation:

http://mangahelpers.com/t/stlwright/releases/23289

 

[LazyBoy18]

Re: + C Cornett Spanish Translation Reviewing

Hi! I would like to help you. I´m a spanish native speaker, so i´ll correct some things, ok?

First of all, i don´t know what was the dialog about before, but if it is as i imagine it, so, there are some little mistakes.

Belca: ¡Gano! // …un Instructor.

Belca: ¡Yo gano! // ... instructor.

If you said "Un instructor", you are saying something like "An instructor", and i don´t really think he is wining an instructor, he probably is saying to his instructor that he has won.
But as i said before, i don´t know the dialog before and maybe that was what he was meaning =)

Instructor: ¡El Príncipe Belca! // Por Favor, cesarías esta manera sucio de estás luchando

Instructor: ¡Principe Belca! // Por favor, detenga esta sucia manera de pelear!

It´s not necesary to say "El" (The, in english), you use it for example, if the prince apear, so, you can say "El principe Belca está aquí" (The prince Belca is here).
Then, i change the word "Cesarias" for "Detenga", because "Cesarias" is used for questions, and in the english dialog, there is an exclamation; so, you use "Detenga" that is another way of saying "Stop"
There is a very little mistake in the word "Sucio", the mistake is in the "Sex" of the word, hahaha! The dirt in Spanish is "Female", so, you have to say "Sucia", instead of "Sucio", that it´s for "Male." :P
I think that, changing some things to make it similar to your translation, ould be like this:
Instructor: ¡Príncipe Belca! // Por Favor ¿Cesaría esta sucia manera de estar luchando?

Belca: Fuiste uno quien dijiste darlo todo conseguí, Instructor
Si satisficieses luego te adelantarías encuéntrese un remplazo.

I don´t wont to ofend you, but in this sentence there are a lot of and bigs mistakes D= Generaly with verb times, and that are things where you have to improve by learning more :/
This is how I would translate it:
Belca: Fuiste tu quien dijo que tenia que darlo todo, Instructor. Si no estás satisfecho, entonces ve y buscate un reemplazo.

bb and don´t give it up!

 

[♀Lady JassiE♀]

Hi! I need some help...

Hi!

It's about a line in the manga that I'm very confused on what it means. I will really appreciate any help from you guys.

The sentence goes like this:
この屋敷の人形は代々当家の主が怨念を封じこめて祀っているものです。
Then, here's my translation of it:
We have been worshipping this mansion's puppets for generations now because it seals in the grudge.

As I said, I will really really appreciate correction/s from you.
Thank you so much..

 

[Solokian]

Raw : with or without hiragana : why?

Hey, I have a noobish question here :
I noticed that there was two type of raw versions out there, one that didn't use any hiragana, and another that had some. Do you know the reason of that difference?
I'm looking for a way to practice my japanese in a fun way, but we haven't learn any kanji yet...
Also I thought manga were supposed to be readable by young children, and I'm pretty sure they can't read all the kanji.

 

[Ju-da-su]

Re: Raw : with or without hiragana : why?

Mainly depends on who the publishers think their reader will be like. Also, depends on the magazines which the manga is/was serialized in.

I mean, most, if not all, of the manga in seinen and josei magazine (eg. Young Jump, Young Ace, etc.) don't have furigana, just as a very clear example. Why? Because young kids aren't supposed to be able to read those (You don't expect a 5-years old to read the manga with uncensored nudity, bloody violence and other strong mature contexts, do you? Don't tell me that you didn't know that those mature contents do exist in the manga world...).

On the other hand, try look at Doraemon. As far as I've heard, Doraemon has almost no kanjis at all, only some of the very basic one. Clearly something that's aiming for smaller children.

If the manga in a magazine does have furigana, all the mangas serialized in that magazine will have them, too. If the manga in a magazine doesn't have the furigana, then well, none of the manga in that same magazines are going to have that thing...

Who said all manga aims for just young children? Publishers evaluate their target audiences, and make their magazine prints, as well as tanko prints, to match out with who they think their readers are. The manga aims for young children? Give them some furigana to make it easier for them to read. Now, it aims for much older audience group? Trash those tiny things. We don't need them.

If you want to practice your Japanese using manga, but still don't know any kanjis, by all means, try to choose the manga with the furiganas for your practice and good luck with it...

 

[Solokian]

Re: Raw : with or without hiragana : why?

This answer some of my questions, but I should have been clearer : I found two raw versions of the same manga (namely GTO shonan 14 days). One without any hiragana nor furigana, and the other one with some. Now the audience rule you mentionned can't apply right, because it's the same content.

Also, while I'm not saying you're wrong to say that mature content isn't aimed to children, I know that in Japan, what we could definitely consider as mature content here is not regarded as such there.

 

[Name-Undecided]

Re: Raw : with or without hiragana : why?

Wait, that's not possible. GTO Shonan always comes with furigana, I've never seen it without. Are you sure you didn't download a Chinese version by accident?

 

[Solokian]

Re: Raw : with or without hiragana : why?

Damn, you may actually be right.

Here it is :
http://www.dm5.com/Comic/MH64/Comics-64601_8102b96f_page-5.htm

 

[Name-Undecided]

Re: Raw : with or without hiragana : why?

Yup, that's Chinese all right.

 

[Solokian]

Re: Raw : with or without hiragana : why?

Mystery solved, thanks for answering ^^"

 

[beyondStars]

Re: Hi! I need some help...

I think it is the other way round.

Because this mansion's puppet's deep-seated grudges have been sealed and appeased by the head of our family for many generations.

 

[bajuwa]

Someone look over my first translation? (Angel Myth ch6)(Ch-En)

So I just translated my first manga (from Chinese simp. to English) and I was wondering if people could make comments/suggestions on it. At the moment I only have the english written down, but when I do translations should I include the chinese as well?


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Also, I did this translation for a certain Manga Editors group and they said I could post it on mangahelpers for tips and help, but I would appreciate people not taking this translation without my permission ^.^
(also is there a way to make this known on my actual page or something?)
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Comments about anything, whether it be translation, flow, grammar, or just plain layout of my translation, are all appreciated ^.^


Anyways, the actual translation can be access through my profile, or i think this is the direct link:
http://mangahelpers.com/t/bajuwa/releases/25330

Edit:
I realise no one has the original to go by for helping with translation, so here is where i got the raws:
http://vnsharing.net/forum/showthread.php?p=3156831