History's Strongest Disciple Kenichi 430

I put a lot of attention in this, as I read people on boards complaining about my translations. If you think that it is better than the previous ones let me know. Without feedback it is difficult to know how to improve.

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Battle 430:saiga and shizuka\\
Now the secret behind miu’s birth will be revealed…\\
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text: the elder will talk about the truth behind the kuremisago tribe. Miu, who was chasing the mystery behind her birth, how will react…?\\
sit down\\
apa, apachai and shigure will be on look out\\
yes\\
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hum…but…\\
maybe, I should go with them too\\
no\\
kenichi-kun you will listen together with her\\as a member of ryouzanpaku\\
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thinking about it, this tragedy began…\\
when miu’s father, in other words my son, furinji saiga, and miu’s mother, shizuha, met\\
saiga, who liked a lot birds and animals, often asked me if he could go to investigate endangered species, and ventured to secluded mountains\\
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on the other side, shizuha was an individual with the most excellent lineage even within the kuremisago tribe, and the ideal places for her walks were the ones regarded as secluded regions. Before long they fell in love with each other\\
the absolute objective of the kuremisago tribe was to match people with the best genes possible… but as time passed,\\
they began to accept love marriage even with normal people as special cases. But shizuha’s family would not accept such naïve thoughts.\\
shizuha and her so called most excellent lineage, were the centre of her clan, and she was already regarded as a religious symbol…\\
they would never permit to marry her to an outsider.\\
especially to marry …\\
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one of us ,of the furinji clan, was excessive\\
eh why?\\
the relations between the furinji clan and the kuremisago clan were so bad?\\
I already told you, shizuha was a symbolic existence within her clan.\\
We came to a delicate situation.\\
That is if an external and strong power should be accepted near the centre of the clan or not…\\
And then the kuremisago…\\
Divided in two.\\
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People who sided with saiga appeared. They thought that this was a chance to put an end to the cursed history of their clan\\
on the other side, there was the power of those who wanted to protect the traditions, lead by the head of the clan, a group of people with incredible power…\\
before long it became a feud* that divided in two the kuremisago\\
TLN: literally here says “great dispute”, but I think feud is more appropriate\\
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the kuremisaigo scattered around the word were dispatched on the field. Private armies, special forces, secret agents…\\
this dispute did never appear on the surface but, fights tainted with blood left their name in the history of the underground world.\\
my son, saiga went through these battles alone and bare handed, without killing anyone\\
… but, because he was protecting his friends, the fights prolonged…\\
before he noticed it, saiga began to think that a small quantity of blood had to spilled for the sake of the great number of lives involved\\
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a little before of that, even if I felt anxiety, I accepted their union and began a trip toward a foreign country…\\
in that far away country, I received a communication from shizuha-kun…\\
For the first time I learnt about these bad circumstances\\
Waa\\
This is bad!!\\
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damn this is the greatest failure of my life! To think that I could not foresee that the situation would become like this…\\
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shizuha-kun!\\
I arrived too late.\\
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a feather?\\
maybe this is an hole to make air pass?\\
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it was…\\
a miracle from a mother who loved her child\\
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if only a few more minutes passed she would have died from cold…\\
after that I heard from some rumours that my son was still alive but…\\
It was not clear. But it is outrageous that he left his wife and daughter’s side to spend his time fighting!!\\
So I regretted from the bottom of my heart that I was not near my son saiga when he was a child\\
And then I decided that, no matter what happens, I would never leave alone you… my granddaughter “miu”, \\
For example, even when I went on a travel around the world\\
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like that…\\
until the day you will meet your father, saiga\\
I knew that…\\
My father was still alive!!\\
Yeah probably\\
No I’m sure of it\\
What’s up ken-chan?\\
No it just that…\\
I was overwhelmed by the magnitude of miu-san’s hardships, even comparing them with the difficulties I had in my own life, they are on a different scale…\\
Miu-san I will make you happy...\\
Stop there!!\\
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Elder, I wanted to say this for a long while but,\\ on despair island I’m sure you said that if I won you would approve our relationship!!\\
elder: don’t hug me\\
the relationship regulation of the furinji family permits at most to hold hands!\\ and the curfew is at the 4 p.m.\\
if you want more you have to defeat me!\\
gunuah… one day I will make you accept me!!\\
everybody, let’s go back\\
to our home\\
the curfew became the 4 o’clock\\right?\\
from that day forward, I had the feeling that\\
miu-san become a little more cheerful\\
sidetext: with a glance to the men who still act like children, miu is really matured after knowing her past. From next chapter a new development!!\\

my thoughts on the chapter: Matsuena changed a little of things regarding shizuka death, miu was not an infant when she remembered her father killing her mother and from some chapters I thought the elder knew what happened to his son and that saiga killed his own wife.