Manga no Tsukurikata 21

[boke's comments in brackets like this]
[Thanks to NaweG for proofreading]

[ver 1.0]

Page 1 Panel 1

New style "yuri" manga artist story

What a (this has nothing to do with the story contents...) charming figure

Hirao Auri's new collection
"April 1st"
On Sale now

Hirao Auri

3-4 Morishita

Morishita!

...yeah?

3-5 Let's get up, huh?

...yeah

4-1 What time is it?

4-2 Wah!

4-3 Crap! Gotta hurry up and take a bath, get ready...

4-4 If we don't go see the deer, it'll be...!!

4-5 Ah

4-6 Who gets the bath first?

Rock paper scissors!

4-7 One...
Two...

5-2 Nara, huh? [Nara is a city near Kyoto, famous for it's temples and deer park]

5-3 What should we do? I forgot to buy a guidebook

6-1 Ah, that's right. It's been off since yesterday

6-2 Sempai, can you grab a towel for me?

6-3 Oh, sorry, I should have noticed

6-4 No, it's not your fault

6-5 Buzz buzz buzz

7-1 Masato...!

7-2 ...no, it's not

7-3 Message Log

[All messages are from Tochihara Publishing]

7-5 Hello? It's Kawaguchi!

Kawaguchi-san!

7-6 What happened? I couldn't get a hold of you...

Nothing...
What's going on? There are all these calls confirming you got my pages

Yes! There's a big problem, Kawaguchi-san!

8-1 One of the pages is missing!

Eh..!!

8-3 Did I forget to put it in!?

8-5 I'll have Masato send it for me...

8-6 Message: Big Sis

8-7 Ignoring it

8-8 C'mon and answer the phone!

9-1 Tochihara Publishing

9-2 I'm sorry, but today's the deadline

Can I have you deliver the page?

9-3 I haven't met the deer yet!

Todaiji [Todaiji temple in Nara has the largest buddha image in Japan]

Nara Park [Where the deer are]

9-4 Fuck off, Masato!

What? Why? Why are you here?

Nara [on map, from left to right]
Shizuoka
Tokyo

Mt. Fuji [mountain]

10-3 Sorry

It's ok...

10-4 Sorry for all the trouble

11-2 Look! It's Sento-kun!! [Sento-kun is Nara city's mascot. However, Kawaguchi is playing around, pointing out a random figure in Tokyo]

Wow, you're right!

11-3 It's Todaiji [Kawaguchi is pointing out Kaminari-mon, a famous wooden gate in Tokyo]

It is!!

11-4 Get mad already!!

Eh?

11-5 Because of having to do roughs and forgetting my page, we couldn't see the deer, right?
You should be pissed off

11-6 Whaaa?

12-1 Tokyo's fun!

12-2 But you come all the time for meetings and stuff

12-3 I do, but we couldn't help it this time

12-4 It's not your fault, okay Sempai?

12-5 It's 100% my fault

12-6 Rabbit Petting Area [They've likely come to Ueno zoo in Tokyo]

13-4 Morishita, you're too nice to me

13-5 Why?

13-6 It's because I love you Sempai

14-2 I can't be nice to you, Morishita

14-4 I said I want to see the deer
And you took me all the way to Nara, right?

15-1 That's nice enough

15-2 [left side] Elephant
Deer
Horses
[right side] Waterside creatures
Restroom
Store

15-4 Sempai, you love me, right?

15-7 Yeah