Manekare Zarumono Oneshot : ManekarezaruMono

Say thanks to Haneul: http://haneulnim.wordpress.com/2010/01/23/manekare-zaremono/
Nevermind... It looks horrible. I don't want to look at it.
I want to make it very clear right now, I have no affiliation with H3.
Close enough... http://haneulnim.wordpress.com/2010/01/24/un-uninvited-people/

Free to use, whatever, I don't care.
I'm really surprised no one cared to do this one since it seemed up there on the list of things people like. By which I mean, there is neat little action scenes, a bunny-girl, a loli, and a pervert. Whatever... I wanted to do this one-shot myself but no time...


招かれざる者
ManekarezaruMono
Uninvited People

page 1

1. Linked to a parallel world,

2. Creatures invade from there

3. Sending those "Uninvited People"
TL note: maybe consider changing uninvited people to it's japanese roomaji if you're into that

4. back to their world

5. is the job of the "Gate Keepers."

6. All the battles, from here they began...!

page 2

a. 招かれざる者
a. (Title)

b. マネカレザルモノ
b. (title in katakana)

c. 期待の新鋭が贈るバトルアクション！！
c. Battle Action offering promising newness.
TL note: newness, freshness... whatever

d. 蓮羅ヨシノソ
d. Yoshinosu Hasura

page 3

1. (music)

2. Target located

3. SFX: Kak Kak

4. Let's go!

5. Roger!

6. Gate open!!!!

7. !!

8. A "gate" ??!!

page 4

1. I'm deporting you home!!!!

2. Bring it!!

page 5

1. ......

2. A "Deportation Gate" ?!

3. It's time...

4. Now!!

5. To deport...

6. Photo Chance!!!!

7. Ee~~~~~~h??!!

page 6

1. Wah...
TL note: crying sound

2. Please don't take pictures...

3. ngh...

4. Gya-!!!!

5. Close Close (music)

6. I have said it before, / in order for you two to become official "Gate Keepers,"

7. you have to capture me, the examiner for this Gate Keeper Exam, / by tomorrow's sunset.
TL note: TS should make his/her own decision on where to split

page 7

1. Oh look! I'm running away~~~(music)

2. Wait...

3. Calm down, Mamori.

4. Patience. / The examination area is this ghost town.

5. You'll tired yourself out recklessly chasing her.

6. Mondo Kadokura (8th grade)

7. However, your eager face sure is cute.

8. Geez... / Please be more eager, Mon-kun!!
TL note: changed "mou..." to "geez..." Why? because I want to.

9. We failed the exam / nine times already.

10. Mamori Konoe (5th grade)

11. The Gate Keepers Association's rulebook states that / if you fail ten times, they decide that you have no talent.

12. Oh! / Your angry face is also good~!!

13. I'll never become a Gate Keeper!! / There is no next time!!

page 8

1. Together with a pitfall. / I, Mamo, will guide the target to it...
TL note: Her nickname is Mamo

2. During that, you will / draw the gate and deport the target back home.

3. But you always

4. just take weird pictures instead...

5. Like these?

6. ?

7. It's your Growth Journal. / I'll never go back. I am devoting myself to your youth.

8. How... How were you in my house and school...??!!

9. This... This kind of thing should be disposed of!!

10. SFX: Close

page 9

1. !!

2. Gates...

3. When did he...?!

4. I predicted what you were going to do.

5. SFX: Gulp
TL note: the loli is scared

6. Secret maneuvers. / I am a genius.

7. The same as when / Gate Keepers corner their prey with traps.
TL note: reTL

8. And, "Gates"

9. SFX: Swoosh
TL note: sorta like a really fast movement sound.

10. are connected to a companion gate.

page 10

1. Special attack: "Gates of a Thousand Hands" !!!!

2. Mamo is not prey~!!

3. Why can't you use

4. this power to help me~?!

5. There are other uses

6. for this sort of handy power?!!!!

7. Please use it to deport.

8. SFX: GehGuh...
TL note: basic sound made when hurt

9. What's so fun about harassing kids?!

10. Guh... I... want to see it...

page 11

1. To see the anguish, distressed, humailiated / pathetic appearance of pure-hearted girls!!!!

2. That is my pleasure!!!! / My hobby!!!!

3. What was that you say?

4. That's just...

5. I am a genuine pervert!!!!
TL note: pervert here means more like "sick bastard"

6. REMEMBER THAT!!!!

7. ..........

8. It's still a thousand years too early to lecture me. / Fool.

a. Oh! Nice look!!

9. Cough... Cough... Forgive m... Mamo is...
TL note: the single m is just me trying to replicate the unfinished word.

page 12

1. Even though I am a part of the guard family that was known as the Konoe family a long time ago,

2. this is the way things are now...

3. Please don't worry, Father.

4. I, Mamo, will somehow take care of the debts.

5. I am a child, but / I'll be a partner. I found a really good one.

6. They say Gate Keepers' work gets lots of rewards. / Mamo will do her very best.

7. Monzou
TL note: I'm going to assume that is the name of the place

page 13

1. Ti... Tis... / This time is my real...

2. Gee... Greek... Greeting...

3. ...Honestly, I do not have any interest in your family's ruins.

4. Eh?

5. Complete Harmony. / Since I'm satisfied with most of the things.
TL note: reTL

6. U-Umm... I may still be a child, but

7. I will do my very best!! / Therefore...

8. !

9. If that's the case, will you believe in me? / Mamori?

10. Ye... / Yes!!!!

page 14

1. We'll start at once. Do you believe / that I have x-ray vision?

2. X-ray...?

3. Is... Is this a test...?

4. SFX: Uh... Uh...
TL note: Okay, that SFX is really "shyness sounds" whatever that means... Change it to whatever

5. But... He can't possibly have X-ray...

6. SFX: Uh... Uh...

7. But but... Those eyes really do look like they can see through...

8. MOMMY

9. SFX: OGya-

10. As expected... You were brought up as a guard...

11. No hesitation to the eyes... my eyes...

12. For... Forgive me... for what I...

13. Seems fun (heart)

page 15

1. Father, / Mamo is doing her best!!

2. Since I will definitely become a Gate Keeper and / make you happy!!

3. (music)

4. Mamori, / use your legs more!!

5. Legs, your legs!! Spread them out more!

6. Don't stop moving!!

7. Please be serious!!

page 16

1. Are you sad, Mamo?

2. You're such a little child... / Come on, curl up here.

3. Please don't lure me like you're my mother...

4. If you're going to sleep, then sleep by yourself.

5. Right... Even though I was going to read you a book!!

6. Please don't treat me like a little kid!

7. That time... / Manta's hand swiftly to the flower garden wet from the penis...
TL note: or something like that... I don't want to keep thinking about it.

page 17

1. Geez... That time when I noticed you in the street,

2. you were such a gentleman. / Why are you so different from that...?

3. If my true self is shown,

4. I will get arrested!!

5. Gentle but firm, / my persona is perfect.

6. ...........

7. ...........

8. Actually... / Actually, what is it that you want to do...?

9. I believe... / that Mon-kun really will be a Gate Keeper...

page 18

1. All I can do is to believe in you.

2. If that's the case, then tomorrow

3. please act properly.

4. Mamo~... / I'll give you a billion, so give me your panties.... SFX: Mumble Mumble
TL note: It really says one hundred million but that is kinda long

page 19

1. Ugh...

2. I-I... I fell asleep...

3. Am I tied up in the nude again...

4. SFX: Rustle

a. Ufufu... Mamo is really such a bad girl... To do that in this sort of place...

page 20

1. Only a little while till sunset...

2. Okay to let it burn away? A flood above ground?

3. Mon-kun, please WAKE UP!!
TL note: guy's name is mondo, mon is short of it. I ignored it before but I guess I will go back and edit them back in. - done

4. Kiss... Mamo, Kiss...(heart)

5. This sure is bor~ing...

6. Should I just run around from place to place...

7. (music)

page 21

1. Please do so!!!!

2. That's the spirit!!
TL note: no clue on this.

3. (music)

page 22

1. Hah...

2. It seems exhaustion caught up with you...

3. Hah...

4. Hah...

5. Hah...

6. Are you going to let it end at sunset?

7. .......... / I will deport you...

8. before that happens...

9. But still...

10. Isn't that your vital partner...?

11. Sure is desperate...

12. Anyways, do you get it?

13. Eh...?

page 23

1. From the beginning, I did not believe that boy can become a Gate Keeper.

2. Shouldn't had chose a brat for a partner to entrust your life to.

3. You can only mock him.

a. Oh wow~!! This is unbearable.

b. I believe you will succeed your family...

c. Will you believe in me?

4. ..........

page 24

1. Mamori believes / in Mon-kun
TL note: reminder edit... those weren't "Kimi" they were "kuns" I am an idiot for only noticing it now. Second run through, you should edit all instances of you when refering to Mondo to Mon-kun. - done

2. ..........

3. I don't hate kids like you, so I thought I'll get you to give up on him, but

4. it seems it had the opposite effect...

page 25

1. But still...

2. up till now, you weren't able to deport me.

3. ..........!!!

4. There are different kinds of "Uninvited People"...
TL note: you know how sometimes in tv shows/movies, people say "there are (insert noun), and there are (insert same noun but with more emphasis)"... yeah, same thing here.

5. They are cannibals and homicidal maniacs / is mostly all true.

6. SFX: Drip
TL note: okay it is really a "lick" sound but English doesn't have a lick sound

7. Guh...

8. I can't win...

9. I was invited as a part-time job.

10. !!

11. It sucks, but / if I'm deported, do I not get paid?

page 26

1. Mon-Kun!!

2. They said nothing about not killing.

3. I'll just have to resist till sunset.

4. ..........

5. Kuh...

6. Utterly shameful

7. Mamori, look to your right!!

8. Eh?

9. !!

page 27

1. It's secret maneuvers. Mamori!!

2. Gate Open!!!!

3. H-How?!

4. SFX: Ba...
TL note: I have no idea what that is...

page 28

1. Mon-Kun is a genius!!

2. SFX: Flap...
TL note: again... sfx... I pretty much just make them up half the time

3. No!! / I am a pervert!!
TL note: omitted the word genuine

4. That's how you see yourself...?

5. Speak!! Scold me violently!!

6. SFX: Flap

7. Kuh...

8. ....tsk / In the middle of photographing...

9. all the while, making gates...

10. Aah. / It was all in order to take secret pictures of Mamori.

11. He's kidding. It was our strategy.

page 29

1. You are already within my territory. / Prepare yourself!!

2. Sniff... Mon-kun is so eager...

3. ...Hey

4. While I was being emotionally moved...

5. SFX: Clank

6. Ah! There you were!!

a. Fish?!
TL note: that kanji looks like "fish" to me... though I won't rule out that it could be wrong.

7. H-How?!

8. It's my prediction to your behavioral pattern.

9. Since I always looked it over in the forecast.

10. Don't... Don't look with those eyes...

11. SFX: Shake... Shake...
TL note: sound of timidness

12. P-Please make a note... / Those eyes have X-ray vision...

page 30

1. To look like this in front of that pervert...

2. Sorry. SORRY.

3. Your actions are completely not apologizing!!

4. I have no interests in your nakedness.

5. What was that?! This damn brat

6. is anything but charming!!

7. I can't get aroused by anything except little girls!!!!

8. Remember it!!!!

9. I'm fully prepared to go to jail snapping those pictures!! / Damn you for breaking that precious camera.

10. He gets angry because of that...

11. This...

page 31

1. preverted pair!!!!

2. You grouped us together!!

3. That's right. You're a pervert-girl. / Aah, how embarrassing!!

4. It's strange... To open a single gate requires a huge amount of energy.

5. To do it so easily... / Why is that boy still an examine?

page 32

1. Reckless. / Always remember that the position from behind is simply and honestly not reckless.
TL note: I'm not even sure I got the meaning correct here...

2. What are you talking about...?

3. We failed the exam because Mon-kun so suddenly came out of a strange place...

4. I can't concentrate...

5. Naturally. / A surprise attack appears by first doing something surprising.

6. You said it that time while acting like an idiot...

7. This damn mole girl!!!!

page 33

1. !!

2. SFX: Shut

3. Again!! / How does that little girl know where the gates are?!

4. Did that boy drew them everywhere?!

5. Hah...

6. Hah...

7. Hah...

8. Hah...

a. Fighting... I cannot lose...

b. If I can recall all the gate's location up to now...

9. What are you doing? / Stand up, Mamori.
TL note: my personal favorite line

10. Hah...

11. Hah...

page 34
TL note: favorite page of this manga

1. Stand up and capture her.

2. The you now can do it.

a. Is it possible that...

b. up till now, in all the exams...

page 35

1. The young girl is at her limits.

2. If I can survive the next attack...

3. it'll be my victory!!!!

4-12. SFX: Bang
TL note: sound of gates opening

13. !!

14. A feint?!!

15. Where are you?!...

page 36
TL note: the first frame in this page... My favorite frame

1. Appearing where least expected. / That is how a Gate Keeper fights.

2. Even if you lose to strength, if you use surprise,

3. you'll capture them.

page 37

1-7. Hah...

8. ...I got her.

9. ...Now...

10. Mon...

11. Ku...

page 38

1. My My My, how cute / that little body tried so hard.

2. SFX: step

3. But, still / you seriously had me there.

4. Now you're going to fail (music)

5. Well then, later

6. Wait

7. .......... Yes?!

8. If you leave the two of us alone, don't you know what may happen...?

9. Who cares? Do what you want!!

10. Heheheh...

page 39

1. Doing what one intended.

2. You believed in me, it's your victory.

3. 3 more seconds

4. till sunset!

5. 2!!

page 40

1. 1

2. I have already said it.

3. You are within my territory.

4. Gate Open!!!!

page 41

1. What... What the hell??!!

2. ??!!... The ground?! / Did Mamo die??!!

3. That's right, Mamo!! / Bad girls go to hell.

4. SFX: Click

page 42

1. Don't believe him!! This is my world!! / Deporting me by opening the village...

2. That's cheating!! My hundred year supply of carrots!! / When did you drew that gate?!

3. Probably then...

4. From the beginning, Mon-kun

5. SFX: GyaGya

6. SFX: Kya (heart)

7. always had the ability to become a Gate Keeper.

8. Mamo was the bad one. / It was me from the beginning.

9. Even though we passed, / I was easily beaten in combat...

10. You learned all that on those ten exams?! / What the hell. / Putting all your faith in that guy like that...

a. That's about it
TL note: I have no freaking clue

11. SFX: Gyah

page 43

1. But

2. He is a really smart pervert.

a. Their battle, from here on

3. Wrong!! Insult me more dirty!! So I can see some filth!!

b. I knew it, they are a perverted pair.

4. You were awake?!

5. ........!

6. Good, Mamo, that's the face!! / A shocking confession!! Mamo is a pervert-girl, trashing about with no panties on!!!!

7. What are you wearing it on your head?!! / I knew it, you did do something to me during the night, didn't you?!

8. I knew the whole time (music)

9. Mondo Kadokura Mamori Konoe Gate Keeper Exam Passed

c. To be continued...?!