Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 9

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Yeah... I've been working on academic stuff that isn't Japanese related. You know those stuff... The stuff that's important and will help you get ahead in the future. The important stuff.
I like to put these tl here since once in a while I come here, look at my tl, then I go, "hey... that doesn't sound right..." I actually put my tl in many places... This is just the one public place. Yeah.

Okay, so brief general idea of what happens in this chapter. The beginning of the School camping trip arc. Or rather, my name for this arc... Heh.

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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 9
Title: Before the Game

page 1

1. You come quite often now, don't you?

2. I really like Ms. Hiromi's piano.

3. And also... / I like talking with you since I never had a woman to look up to before.

a. FuhFuh

4. That makes me happy.

5. Oh right!

6. I have news! I'm going to have a sleep over!

page 2

1. A sleepover?

2. My school is having an orientation for 2 nights and 3 days.

3. Aah!

a. How nice.

4. We'll be hiking and boat riding...

5. I get it, I get it. You'll be watching / the stars at night around a campfire...

6. Ah...

7. ?

8. Do you not like stars?

9. No, it's just...

10. It's not that I hate them but...

11. ...It's hard for me to explain, I guess...

12. I guess I'm jealous of everyone else's enjoyment...
TL note: come back to this

page 3

1. What if / someone asks "Come watch with me?"

2. Eh?

3. I could not see the stars, but / the time spent with my friends was very fun.

4. You as well, should try inviting "the person you want by your side." / Then perhaps those gloomy thoughts will be blown away.

page 4

1. You only have to ask.

2. With just that, your world will change.

3. ......

4. ...So, going to ask a boy?

a. Kyah

5. My goodness, what will you do?

6. Eh? EEEEEEEH?!

page 5
TL note: remember, I go top-down, then right to left, though hopefully with the pictures there, the tl will be pretty obviously where they should be

Title: Before the Game

a. --Tokusa Private Middle School Class 3-B #21 Kiri Haimura's belongings--

b. Hiking Boots

c. Backpack (Everyone prepares a big one)

d. Thermos

e. Toothbrush - Bug Spray - Aspirin
TL note: it doesn't exactly say aspirin, but the other word is too long...

f. Orientation Handbook

g. Handkerchief - Tissue

h. Cold Weather Clothes

i. Cellphone

j. Jersey and Track Suit (The usual school designated ones)

k. Writing Supplies

l. Scissors (Personal Item)

m. Towel - Gloves

n. Underwear (For all the sweating)

page 6

1. So,

2. I met the Rulebook that night.

3. Ms. Zenigata quickly regained consciousness.

4. Ah, umm...

5. Ms. Zenigata...?

6. Ugh...

7. I'm really sorry for all this!

8. How you had to carry me all the way to a hospital!

9. No, no, it's okay...

page 7

1. I'm just glad nothing happ...

a. Haha...

2. I umm... Now, how can you say that? / I thought it felt pretty good when I lost consciousness.

3. A while back, after I failed to escape from a choke hold in my police judo training... / Now how should I say this... Even though I blacked out...

b. No, nevermind. It's too embarrassing.

c. Woah
TL note: right of Kiri

4. Ah!

5. Huh? What?!

6. You don't feel the same?!
TL note: reCheck

7. I don't want to know.

page 8

1. I can't help that I like it...

2. Ah, umm... / Anyways, thank Ms. Byouinzaka. / She's the one who showed me the hospital...

3. (skull)

4. ...Hey, you, / why did you call me?

5. Because I didn't know anyone else who knew more about the goods than you...

a. And the Professor didn't want to talk about it.

6. B-But, I'm your enemy!

7. S-Sorry!

b. (But, you did helped her though)

8. Well, I have something I want to say...

9. You

10. You're Rulebook's "Instead," aren't you?

page 9

1. ...Is that perhaps

2. related to the Killing Goods?

3. ...The higher ups in the police department have a connection to the group "Gossip." / I know they are helping him...

4. I heard they were originally an organization

5. Simply for the upper class.../ With the world leaders as its center.

page 10

1. That's about right.

2. Gossip is an / "observation" group.

3. They don't directly do anything to the Authors. / They administrate any information they can to encourage killing the Queen. / That's all. And for that reason...

4. they disgust me.

5. ...I see, so you are all

6. connected to this somehow...

page 11

1. Justice Nakajima's bizarre power

2. His "Rulebook of Sentencing and Execution" Killing Good

3. is activated by the terrible crimes of murders and thieves. / Like the start of a trial

4. But, there's another requirement that favors him... "Flagrant Observation."

5. "The judge sits front-row"...

6. In order to have an Author commit a crime before him, / he'll be using it somewhere even now.

page 12

1. In addition... / He's no longer getting the same high as he did when he killed criminals.

2. ...The human mind is not that strong...

3. That's why I chase him.

4. I will do whatever it takes / to stop him...

page 13

a. Sorry... May I have a tissue? My nose is running...

b. Hey

c. Here

1. I failed to mention any of this to Iwai.

2. And time went its course.

3. ...It's now the start of Golden Week

4. Hah

5. Hah

6. ...

7. Hah

8. Hah

9. Done...

page 14

1. It's the middle of orientation.

2. Only the high schoolers get the bus... / We all had to walk from the base of the mountain...

a. Uaahhh...

3. It took around three hours...

b. You okay?

c. yeah...

4. You don't look tired at all, Kotarou...

c. Amazing

d. I'm not tired

5. because I work out.
TL note: okay... "I train" sounds odd to me here. He does practice the Iai arts... so, I don't know if that is included in the "work out" verb.

6. As expected from the ace of the Iai club.
TL note: Iai is the art of sword drawing.

7. Oh.

page 15

1. Good job, under-classmates!

2. We have Barley Tea here for all of you.

a. Oh!

b. Wah (heart)

c. Their reactions are so strange

d. It isn't strange at all.

3. Okay, what are your numbers?

4. We're group 4 of 3-B...

e. Ugh

5. If the entire class is here, then line up according to your groups. I'm going to give an introduction to the facilities.

6. ...It's not food time yet?

7. ...Don't think we'll let you eat that easily!

8. ...Hey...

9. Wait... Time out...

page 16

1. Aren't you treating your underclassmen kinda bad? / huh? Mr. Upperclassman? HUH?!

a.. Aah?!

2. Well, the general idea behind this training camp is something along the lines of "teaching you how unfair the world is."

3. Because we were treated like this two years back, / you too will experience the same torment.

4. This is bullying!!

5. It's a never-ending spiral of evil!!

b. So, we prepared the curry like you said.

c. SFX: growl
TL note: stomach growl

d. Thanks

page 17

a. SFX: I really rather not have this SFX TS simply because it doesn't translate well into english... Also, I'm only 50% sure what it is.

b. Ngh.

1. ......

2. ...Who was the one who invited her to our group?

c. SFX: Sip Sip...
TL note: I like to think he is drinking the water

3. I did.

d. She would've been all alone if I didn't...

4. How come you aren't with Iwai?

5. Er, she was braiding hair with the other girls...

6. Ah, I see...

page 18

1. It was Iwai

a. SFX: Sip Sip...

2. that said she was embarrassed to be together at school though...

3. Sigh, to be lonely is to be alone.

4. Oh right, I wonder if the teams on the opposite side made it up yet.

5. It is getting dark...

6. However...

7. Kiri / Kiri!

8. Ah, you're here.

b. I didn't expect you to make it since you're so small.

9. Hey, Kiri

10. You didn't forget it, right? You are prepared, right?

page 19

1. Later today, you see...

2. At night... Okay?!

3. 'Kay.

4. Text me the place later.

5. I have a promise with a girl today.

a. See you later!

6. That is the only thing on my mind.

page 20

1. So much preparations...

a. You finished your task?

b. Yes!

2. Tomorrow is the main event. / I wonder if the preparations will be enough, Ms. Vice-President.

3. ...Mr. President... Do you mean

4. the star gazing?

5. Or perhaps, the Queen's death?

page 21

1. There was a very suspicious letter sent by "Gossip," but... /more surprising is how they are this close to us now.

2. Tomorrow will be the Queen's final day.

3. That sends shivers down my spine just thinking about it.

page 22

1. To do something like this

2. It must be irresistible, / isn't it?
TL note: for TS, rearrange to fit better as you see fit

page 23

1. The brutal murderer, whose referred to as the "lord of the pigs" by the newer generations, was a Meiji era noble. / The death of a loved one changed him.

2. Many guests were invited to his mansion, but all of their existence were erased. / ...And, almost all of them were later found in horrendous states.

3. Because of hunger and disease... The victims were tied up in the basement of the mansion. / and only given little food and water, and a raggedly rug.

4. They were raised like livestock.

5. They became submissive like pigs

6. from being struck by master's whip.

page 24

1. The path to domination will start here.

2. Turn compliment by being struck. / Gain power by striking.

3. Once a human hears the crack of the whip, / that sound

4. will turn a him into a pig.

page 25

1. I want my shoes licked

2. by the pigs / By the pigs...

page 26

a. Hoo... Hoo...
TL note: owls

b. SFX: Wiggle
TL note: um... I could be a SFX for the blanket being flapped up. Or... something else, I'm just guessing here. Or it could be what I have... meh...

c. Oooh!

d. Oh Oh Oh

e. Whoa! Her boobs are huge!

f. Wah, isn't this stuff inappropriate for kids? / L-cup...? This magazine is amazing!
TL note: Before this I didn't know there is a L-cup, also the first hit on google for "L cup" has a pretty model in it :D... and... (insert bra jokes here for Luna). Or you know... It could just mean "Large"... Meh
TL note2: this line was long but was 2 or 3 people speaking. The dash for this line is for the difference speakers.

g. I am interested in that though...

1. I'm

2. I'm going to use the toilet.

page 27

a. It's a little cold

1. A little past 12

2. My personal main event

b. I'm hiding on the side of the road across from the plaza

3. Under the night sky,

c. Iwai....

4. With just the two of us, / hidden from the rest,

d. Iwa...

e. SFX: Wiggle

page 28

a. Camouflage...

b. Kiri, no one

c. saw you leaving, right?

1. ...is the ultimate situation!!

2. Well, Iwai, / Let's cut your hair!